Reviews for Abundance of Feelings |
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Yet Another Girl chapter 10 . 7/27/2013 That last part was so sweet! I loved it. I also like fast-paced things, because, often, I don't have a lot of time. Thanks for writing the story! |
voldyismyfather chapter 10 . 3/23/2010 aw love it |
tyrani13 chapter 10 . 9/6/2009 love it |
fantasia-49 chapter 10 . 3/21/2009 hi it was good and great really! i love it! |
FantasiaInGreen chapter 10 . 11/1/2008 so sweet! |
KonnichiwaJessica chapter 10 . 10/20/2008 I really enjoy your writing style. It isn't J.K. Rolling's, but you've defiantly kept me interested through out the whole story, so good job in that category. Good voice, nice use of vocabulary, and great plot. Though I should advise you to stay clear of rushing your stories. This story had much potential, but I'm afraid it was lost in what were seemingly frantic endings on a few chapters. Slow down a little... take some time with the plot. Even things out a bit. Make both the reading and writing experience enjoyable for you and the readers as much as possible. Merely subjections! Other than that you've got a good piece of work under your belt. I hope there will be plenty more to come in the future. |
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 2 . 10/16/2008 see? now when he was nice and charming, i squeled whne he was nice and said to call him Josh. Now i'm going to have to kick Joshes $$ because he is evil -sigh- i'll let Draco kill him! |
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 1 . 10/16/2008 awness! i shall try to reveiw in every chapter! yayness~ ~Sarah!~ |
leilygurl chapter 10 . 10/16/2008 hey! well wonderful story congrats its was short, however, it did not affect the story any, since it was a very nice, sweet story that truly just focused on the important things, one of them being that hermione and draco ended up together in the end. but seriously, amaziing story. i truly enjoyed every sentence from it, and that ending! o my god how sweet! i so totally loved it! again, congratulations you are a wonderful author, and i will so keep my eyes open for any other story you write, specially if it has to do with hermione and draco! much love and kisses, wishing you all the luck in the world, leilygur. |
miss quirky bookworm chapter 10 . 10/14/2008 omg i can't beleive this is over. but im surprised they werent bombarded even tehre. |
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 10 . 10/14/2008 great |
ash chapter 4 . 9/3/2008 or... it could mean 'Only Original Character'? |
leilygurl chapter 9 . 9/1/2008 wow. i didnt see that one comming! great chapter. keep up the good work. cant wait to see what happens. kisses leilygurl |
miss quirky bookworm chapter 9 . 8/31/2008 wow that was a twist. they should just kill Beckett |
Gin-Sensu chapter 8 . 8/27/2008 Gasp! what now? |