very nice

Very good read, I really liked it.

You should really tone down the overly description. It makes the story and scenes too drawn out. The scenes tend to ramble on and it's easy to forget what was happening in the scene.
This story seems really great, and I'm happy to find a Dawn/Darkrai fic. But sadly I couldn't get past the halfway point.

A fantasticly written fanfic, you should be proud of your work.

10/10

I simply loved this. I love the moral about Sinnoh's devision you added. It has philosophical background to it. I surely wouldn't have come up with that...and oh, you made a good point about pokephilia or whatever it's called. I mean, I not exactly found of it but I don't neglect it either. It's true, one cannot compare a animal to a freakin' pokeman (lame pun intended). Yeah, sure, Animals can talk to us through telepathy and guide us around with Aura abilities (Lucario). Ratata now would be really creepy to be paired up with a trainer because it really really resembles a mouse. But quite a few resemble human forms.
Anyways, I hate it when I come across an adult rated fiction that catches my attention...you! This is so greatly written! I didn't want to read any lemons so I missed out on how she caught Darkrai but otherwise I loved it to the fullest! Especially the beginning and the atmosphere of the harbor was so...what do you call it? Spiritual? Man, I felt just like this when I cheated the card (I hate those stupid Nintendo releases) It was so creepy! That old man scared the living sh*t outta me and I was all confused when the player appeared on the Island. So well done, Nintendo!

why a one shot?! *crys*

You should make a sequel

Yu should make a second chap or a sequel. It'd be interestring.

Awesome! Great one-shot, but I think you should continue it!

Amazing detail. Great plot...hot porn scene. Pretty good!

i really love and ardure this story and i want to know how scatterbrain barrey reacts to darkri and see what happens afterwards

As a fan of this paring I must say this is probably the best fanfic I've read for this paring and hopefuly the story will continue :)

I always love unique pairings, and you did a great job writing this one. It was perfectly paced, and very nicely written. Keep up the great work!

This was really good, please do another/make a sequel/make another chapter!