Reviews for If Only She Knew |
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Trogdor19 chapter 6 . 8/19/2009 This is a great story! I like how you keep the pacing slow enough to make it realistic (not like HEY! This is a story about Roy dying!) but fast enough for short story status. Also, I'm glad you didn't put spoilers in the main story description. |
SecretWriter225 chapter 2 . 11/23/2008 AMAZING. I love the way you described everything, and the way you just planned everything out. This is amazing! |
NarcissaMalfoy1119 chapter 13 . 11/14/2008 LOVED this story! It was SO cute and very well written. Yay for Jim and Pam! |
Unavailable chapter 13 . 11/12/2008 ew... baby mama drama. Stay away from that, Jimbag! Might as well execute your wallet mob style. |
sarabara chapter 13 . 10/23/2008 i thought this story was so cute and i loved how you wrote it! great job :] |
bingbangboom714 chapter 13 . 10/22/2008 awh! It was so cute! I loved it! Great job! |
dancer288 chapter 13 . 10/22/2008 wow...i just read it all because i couldn't remember what happened...i loved it...i really enjoyed how the ending gave us a good recap of the years you skiped...hope to read more of your work soon! |
Mrs. Fitzgerald chapter 13 . 10/22/2008 So sweet! I love hearing about Jim and Pam with kids! |
ktface3 chapter 13 . 10/22/2008 Bravo! Excellent job my friend. I really thought this was a great way to wrap everything up: we got to see some of the ups and downs of their life, how the families came together for the baby ("three sets of grandparents" killed me, it was so cute), and even some of the hardships they had to go through and how they handled it. And you had them handle it very well I should say; very realistic. Congrats again; I'm so glad I could be a part of it! |
dadiva18 chapter 13 . 10/21/2008 I have always loved this fic and I'm sad that it is at its end, but it was great! I loved the ending and PLEASE wrie more soon! LOVE IT! |
Renji Obsessed chapter 12 . 10/6/2008 aww. what a cute Jam story. |
JAMonMyToast chapter 12 . 10/4/2008 OK, I just read all twelve chapters and I can only say one thing. Great. Job. You keep the Jim and Pam banter light and airy, yet when the setting is tense you can still keep them in character. I enjoyed it the whole way through, and I'm super happy to say that it was not a long, boring ride. It was a fun story to read. |
Inactivekj562 chapter 12 . 10/3/2008 I read this entire story tonight and loved it! |
squintsquad03 chapter 12 . 10/3/2008 Aww. Isabella Kathleen is a very cute name. Jim was very sweet in this chapter, too. ] Great chapter. |
bingbangboom714 chapter 12 . 10/3/2008 I loved it! Post the epilouge soon please! Great job! |