Great story, I just wish you c ould have made it a littke linger cause your onto something good here :)

Whoa. Creepy!

Epic

Awesome one shot. I really liked the battle that was more serious for one of them than the other. I liked that because they had a close relationship she was able to tell that something was wrong. I also liked that he didn't hurt her, but still enabled it so she was out of his way.

Oh why couldn't we have had this in the show? Why? It would've fitted in so perfectly and furthered increased the drama beautifully, but no. The shows were limited to 30 minutes and not enough episodes - suckage! Bring back Mystic Force, it rocked!

Finally! An evil Ranger\good Ranger pairing that's not Tommy\Kim! This is brilliant!

I like it!

Even when he is under an evil spell he loves her; once again good story, but you need to expand it. Also, you have a tiny mistake at the end...you need to have you instead of a to in this sentence: "I can’t have you telling anyone..."