Hehehe. This is pretty great. I like how this played out.

This is incredibly sweet, I think the show lost a great deal of potential when they killed Ash and this just reminds me how much I miss him. It even makes Jo likebale! Balanced, true to character, insightful... a wonderful piece. Any more Ash would be gratefully appreciated (and reviewed)!

I'm an Ash fan he is cool and sweet. not to mention hot. anyways. him and Jo would be good together. Keep up the great work :D

Ha! This is all kinds of adorable and so very, very Ash.

that was good. i liked it a lot. i love ash and miss him loads. there should be lots more ash fan-fics!

Aw I miss Ash :(. But this was so very nice.

Yay! An Ash fic! There;s WAY too little of them. Hs ha ha. I could see Ash doin' that. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

i liked it! ha!awesome!