interesting to read

nice

I will admit I was very close to exiting out of this because I thought it wouldn't be interesting. However, I was proved wrong when I got further into the story.

Like the fact John is a Uchiha and everything we knew about him was a fake. I loved the reactions the team had when they discovered who or what he is.

Now, taking two shows that will never ever collide in the first place surprisingly mesh well together. Only if it was written well, which it was. The story was great and I would definitely read it all over again. If there was a sequel about John coming back, I'll definitely read that!

Until then,

Mrs. Fantasy

Well this was pretty interesting. I kind of like the idea of John copying his way into those AF skills using his bloodline. The other Naruto verse characters involved were a good choice as well, though I admit it would've been funny to see their reactions to Naruto's loud exuberance. Glad there's no epilogue leaving the possible John/Weir vague. Because, really, once she learned more about John and his culture there's no way Elizabeth could stay with him, much too bloody for her pacifistic heart. It always surprised me we didn't see her talking to the shrink at the end of every ep

Bravo!

4/5

good story u still planing an epilog

One spelling error: "Troup" is "Troop" if you meant a military/shinobi fighting group.

I think you should leave it as it is. Don't soften the ending, for goodbyes are always a sad thing.

Your story has come far since I reviewed that little one-shot... You made it a great story, and I look forward to seeing your other stories.

Your Truly,

Xeno Major

write and epilogue, please i need closer! this is awesome, give it a proper ending !

hmm, i'd still say that this is far from over! i mean for instance, from what village and why did the other team come from to kill john, and how on earth did they get to atlantis? and why are they needing john back at home? plenty of questions hon, you've just made the proloque of a thriller here :D

Cool chapter! Look forward to the completion of the fic and a happy end for John.

Beautiful. Truthfully, I found few spots were it could have been better, but I didn't really have any advice to help. Your writing style has improved massively. Good Chapter.

Yours Truly,

Xeno Major

It will end by the blade of a knife isn't really a problem with the whole mind-perspective.

This battle would be ended by the blade of a knife(2).

That's more of a dramatic point, not a person thinking. So, if you're worried about the 'he-thinks' 'she speaks' thing, don't worry, because its fine.

Great Chapter,

Xeno Major

not a bad fighting scene! it's going to be interesting to see if we know any of the opponents. i'd also like to see becket's oppinion of sakura's skills :P

Hmm? It was Neji who came? Now that was a surprise. Can't wait to see who the opposing team is, people we already know or totally new characters. And second interesting question would be how did they get to Atlantis.

Really liked the chapter! Am very much a fan of Shep/Weir too.