so I love your writing a lot its awesome your stories are great everything great but the one thing that bothers me about the stories you write is that you always leave on a cliff hanger.

i enjoyed this, thanks

excellent story. ending sucked.

Loved the set-up and story but the ending felt forced and way too abrupt. It seems like you ran out of steam and threw this out there so it could be marked complete.

This looks hilarious!

Wow so I was going to PM you but it won't let me. I can remember reading this story and loving it. The other day I read through all my old PM's and saw some of your replies to my old reviews. Which then made me sad because I of course thought you were actually dead. After I thought you were killed I stopped reading fanfiction for a LONG time. It's been about three years. I just recently started reading it again. And I am just now finding out that you are actually alive. As much as people are giving you a hard time about it and although it is upsetting that it was all fake, I just wanted to say that I'm genuinely happy you are actually alive and okay. You were one of my favorite authors and I loved your story. I was sincerely upset when I thought you were dead. But I'm glad you aren't! Don't let the flamers get to you. It's not worth it. Keep your head up. Much love. 3

LOVED 3

omg that was so funny i 3 the part where he gives her the rose and she screams, "GOD DAMMIT" lol this was great can't wait 2 read more

Why did you leave it just there? Finally, you create tour biggest cliffhanger and then you end it? Haha, just kidding. I love your stories and I love your writing style and creativity. Honestly, you are the best author I've ever seen on fan fiction. I love your stories and will always keep supporting you!

Little Miss Sunshine

Oh wowwwww wat a fanfic I never read any fanfic wid this concept before n I totally loveeeee it I lovee how Bella stayed in game jst for Edward awwww n amber/Alice was always der for Bella wooohooo n m glad even after knowing everything abt Edward n his family Bella stayed till end n fall for Edward too wooohoo anyways very goood fanfic

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LMAOOO.! I love this story :D

I know that you no longer read these but I needed to say that I have read almost all of you stories and I really love them. Also that I am sorry that rude, mean people drove you off of this site. There is no call for anyone to act that way. If you don't like something then don't read it! I think that you are a wonderful writer and wouldn't be surprised if someday you were published.

Mickey

I DO like this twist. It means E will be forced to choose one of the human girls...

B didn't really tell him why she wanted to stay the night before...

So cute! I like that they are both sooo reluctant.