Mind your grammar...

Three words: I. LOVED. IT :D 333

I came across this, and i love it!

Rippal goodness!

Great Job!

First off, Gippal is a sexy beast, and the whole dominating side of him, while shocking was wicked attractive. I never thought I'd see the day when he'd almost rape Rikku.

The twist you pulled though was interesting, and I liked how much Gippal cared for Rikku. As for the smut, it was very well done, in my opinion.

Thank you very much for writing this story.

~Rushi

aw that was sweet and exotic lol great job! although i hated it when Rikku cried damn u Gippal lol jk he was hot like that tho lol

NICE~

nice job.

i liked it

Huahahahaha, portuguesa, hein? Maravilha, vamos nos entender!

Eu também tenho essa mania, de tentar não repetir palavras. Acho que deixa o texto mais rico. Não tenho nenhum texto que valha a pena ser lido na , mas tenho um blog, e estou sempre revisando meus textos, tentando fazê-los mais inteligentes e interessantes.

Gostei mesmo da sua fic, ficou, de fato, muito interessante. De modo que eu sequer suspeitava que você é portuguesa. Meus parabéns, estou até com inveja!

Ok... I gotta say, wow... I mean, you made it look realy real, with the interuptions, and problems and stuff... Not that I could tell, but it looked like this could happen in reality, so... You got the point...

And nice usage of the english vocabulary, I mean, I'm brazilian and have the level of a english speaking native, and still I had some difficulties reading your fanfic.

Nonetheless, attaboy! Or girl, I'm not sure which one you are...

Great job for an English fic, considering it's not your first language :] Just make sure (and this is a criticism I can hit myself with, speaking French) that your tenses are correct; it may be beneficial to find a beta who is fluent in English.

Aww that was sweet. The beginning was a bit shocking but once i got what was going on i knew this was going to be sweet and clever :)