very cute! I love how you characterized Karen!

in the name of the moon ill punish them X3

Great story. You've hit Karen's and Jiiya's father-daughter dynamic perfectly, and provided a very believable and sweet scenario for Karen and Komachi's first meeting. Komachi's leaf story was also cute, and Karen's way of looking at the world. You obviously remember very well what it's like to be a child.

Cute! I never considered how Komachi and Karen met before. Karen was very in-character too. Nice job.