Now that’s what I call, a good story

This is amazing! I've been at the edge of my seat voraciously reading this. I'm sad that I'm at the end of the currently published work. I can't wait for the update.

Ah so it is with great sadness I come to the end. I will live in hope that this will be updated one day. It wss starting to get exciting and i had hope of Jareth's redemption. When all is said and done though, I honestly hope you are well!

Oh no. What did he do to Leo?

I'm enjoying the sequel. Young jareth annoys me and I so prefer the "real" Jareth for all his arrogance and dark obsession. I was so glad to see "real jareth" in this chapter hehe.

I admit, I am a lurker. I rarely review (and I know I should more) because it's so difficult to do so on cell phone format.

Hello Ergott, I read a lot of fanfic particularly from the Labyrinth fandom. One of your best strengths, I feel, is your dialogue skills. I really enjoy the banter between j/s. You also describe environment, mood and scenery very well without going too wordy. I am kind of intrigued by how much you bring Sarah's whole family as more frequent characters. I haven't read a labfic that has done that so much yet.
I get my heart hung up too much when I read a dusty WIP that I love. So I tend to stay away from them. DO was complete but lead into LFT. I am hoping that you still have some inspiration to finish this sorry. I really love how it gives backstory or fills in plot holes from there original film.

I have no idea what music you listen to. But I was discovered "In This Together" by Apocalypta Berzerk. The lyrics and mood very much reminded me of DO/LFT. I realize so many beg for a WIP to be finished. I hope you come back to it someday.

much appreciation for your beautiful writing style.

I found your fanfics about a week ago and read both of them and now I’m sad because there’s no completion of this one

After reading Dramatic Orchestrations, I saw that there was a sequel and jumped to read it, but find it unfinished! More than 10 years without an update :(
(If you ever do decide to come back to this, I would love to see what you do with it)

This story is terrific! Thank you for sharing your imaginative powers and writing artistry. Dec. 2018

Wish you would finish it...the story is lovely and was just picking up in intriguing ways!

Oh man! It was just getting good! I hope I will one day be able to finish reading this sequel when you update.

I love this story

I am immensely glad for Sarah's maturity in this sequel; that always bothered me in the first story, but I understood that just because she was old enough to be mature and aware of the situation did not mean she actually was ready for it. She was still on a Precipice of maturity even at 19. But here at 24? She seems more confident even if it's a quiet confidence and it shows in her acknowledgments and decisions. She's not so strung out on stress this time around and it makes this story so much more enjoyable to read because it's not as angsty as the first. I'm glad you tried to finish up this tale with a sequel and tie up all those loose ends (and hopefully make a happy ending) but since this hasn't been updated since 2010 I'm guessing you're out of love with this tale you've made or perhaps (though I hope not) you're still struggling with your disorder (potential disorder?). Whatever the case, just wanted to leave you a not that I've very much enjoyed your writing style as well as the tale you've crafted. I love Jareth's family especially and Karen and Sarah's relationship is something I can relate to. Well done!

So close to fulfillment!

I really hope you continue this someday, it has been a great read