Reviews for The Scorpia Ludovica : A Dying Breed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Please update soon! I love the plot! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing I really hate about this story is that the main character is like an emotionless robot who only takes order without complains, and you don't describe much about her feelings. And in this chapter, less than one-eighth of the time, the main character wasn't even involved or mentioned, and seemed to merely be standing there like a tree in the background for decoration. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! I know you haven't updated in 3 years but I still hope you continue this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! please please update soon I want to know what will happen |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this story TO THE EXTREME! haha and i don't care if it's a marys-ue or whatever. what's wrong with a mary sue anyway? your story's still great. keep it up! c: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I'm almost choking with curiosity... D: You really have to update... 3 As much as Mysteries thrill me,I guess the suspense can kill. xD I really enjoyed reading your work, please do update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the start up to the recent chapters of your story. It follows some Anime fillers and you are really sticking to the characters' personality. Although I quite notice that there had been a really quick pace on Yamamoto and even Gokudera every time Lia comes in. Good luck on your next chapters :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap, what the hell happened? |
![]() ![]() OH! you updated! my LUCK! and CLIFFHANGER! argh! no GokuHaru action yeat? :( LoL... |
![]() ![]() I hope you update your story soon... I wanna see the ending! LoL... Well, I WANNA SEE GOKUDERA AND HARU ACTION! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your rambling made me smile. :) |
![]() ![]() Are you going to continue this story? So far, I like it. Quite interesting, although there is a bit of Mary Sue factor here and there; but all in all I'd like to keep on reading it. All the best! |