Great S the interesting character you have backstory is very nice and smooth and I am enjoying the story very much

Isn't a fumbled ore dead?

This has me hooked already.

The concept of the story seems interesting, but the grammar and sentence structure is horrendous. I would suggest that you have a beta go through this whole thing and clean it up. If it weren't for that, i think this would be an excellent story, but without it, it's actually difficult and painful to read.

Just finished your story and it was great one of my favorite

Really good story so far you deserve more reviews than 10.

I liked this a lot.
I did get the feeling that the first half or so of the story was better written than the second, as the first half had absolutely wonderful introductions with very realistic interactions, and I was wondering if you rewrote that first half later more than the second half, but it might just be me, or it might just be that the second half was more about magic and heroics while the first half was about introductions, meetings and the beginnings of the mystery. Right, long sentence.
Anyways, love it, and heading over to the sequel as well soon.
Thank you for writing and sharing this.

I had just read all twenty eight chapters in two days and I have to say this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read! This deserves way more reviews than eight. I can't wait to start reading the sequel I know it'll be just as thrilling as this one was.

Im very happy im reading this.

You got your reducto and reducio spells mixed up. Reducio makes things smaller, reducto blows stuff up.

Thank you so much for this story. I've spent a week reading it as throughout I have been fascinated by the story line. It is by far the best fanfic I have ever read. Once again thank you and now I move onto the sequel which I'm sure will be just as brilliant!

I love this story! I can't believe it only has 4 reviews! I love that your writing a sequel!

Hello Entropist,

Where have you been all this time? You've really written a truely awesome story :D

I'm surpirsed that it hasnt been reviewed even more! Sad that :(

As said before OC's generally are not that well developed as canon characters but Alexander is simply rocks :)

I really enjoyed reading your story!

I've just started with your next story now! So see you there.

Thank you for the wonderful story

Well! I enjoyed that a lot more than I expected! OC's generally don't develop as smoothly as Alexander did. But I found him to be a very likable character.

There were a few technical mistakes strewn about, but nothing a sharp editing eye wouldn't catch. I admire your ability to make JK's characters yours without completely warping them until they're unrecognizable.

Your talent to unfold a story overshadows most of the tiny scribblings on this site. With gusto, I applaud you.

Hey man, nice writhing :D I've just read all the story since you've update it, it was intresting and I can't wait for you to upload the next story... The warlocks of Atlantis sounds pretty good. Hope to see more fanfics of yours soon.