m... really liked this. It makes you think and that's a good thing to be able to do to your readers.

Great dialogue. I appreciate the thought you've put into Kakashi's character. He is certainly more complex than he first appears. Keep writing!

you know, i read some of your other reviews and I just don't think this is getting enough credit. I think your characterization of Kakashi as the tragic hero with a 'god complex' was very appropriate. Not only does it make since within the context of Kakashi's fame and talent, but it also explains much of his distancing behaviors. I would be really interested to read this version of kakashi in a longer story.

"...he realizes that Konoha’s greatest weapon now has to bow to a force much greater than he would allow himself to believe."

Love.

Aw...Lovely job as always. _

I really loved this!

Kay... er... wow. That was some of your best work, I think. When are you going to update RSR, by the way?

hmm. Not your best work... most likely at the bottom, but everyone has those days. It seemed forced and not at all natural. This sentence - ("She has not grown out her hair and it is only a bit longer than it was when she was fifteen."), wasn't the best descriptive piece you've done... also, the 3rd paragraph from the bottom - ("“I don’t know,” he admits truthfully...") is "not"(bold) a good one. You used 'he' way too many times and it got... tedious.

Although I don't know why you did this, though I think it was because your muse or PBs, I'm glad you can get things out. I was expecting something more but you can always be my 'superman'. Please revise it or something. I'd stick with the T rate though, 'Kindies' couldn't comprehend this, ya' know. Write more! Later.

I liked this one-it has a creepy, dark undertone to it. Are you hinting at a possible side-effect of the Mangekyou?

aww simple but very pretty :)

M, I really liked it It's pretty deep, and a little confusing, but I still like it I still don't undertand the whole plot of this story, but I enjoyed it