Sequel?

A finished Yakari story! I'm overjoyed! Anyway I loved it. It had the most perfect ending! Honestly I just started reading Yakari fics TODAY and you are, by far, the best writer of this couple! You have really turned me onto this couple! You captured their emotions and their characters so well and the fact that there was a bit of Taiora, well that's just the icing on the cake!

I just wished there were more Yakaris out there! Maybe Ill write one! Heheh.

Okay so I'm going to go read more of your stories! I don't know if you're still writing on here but you should definitely continue. You're very talented!

Aww poor Hikari! She deserved a better reaction than that! Also I bet you'd write one hell of a lemon! I love your style :))

Aw, this is really cute and wonderful! I love the plot and how you developed the characters. Great job!

Aww, i loved it! Amazing! I really want to read more of your stories! I never really considered a YaKari until recently, and I think it's the best couple ;d

Loving it so far. Im always a sucker for Yakari

So first off I LOVE your story. I'm normally all for the Takari stories but the plot line has me drawn in. Just one teeny tiny thing... From the beginning we were told that Hikari was 18 and Yamato was 21; so constantly using the eighteen-year-old and twenty-one-year-old gets really repetitive and a little distracting. Just a thought. But other than that no complaints! :D

Yours,

C.C.

You've managed to sway me to Yamakari fics! I love this story way too much. Thank you! :)

Aww, that was so cute. Everything I love about stories. :D

OMG! i know this is only the first chap and you posted it like a thousand years ago but OMG OMG OMG you have Matt, Trunks and Goten in the same story! my head is about to explode too much cuteness in the air!

yet again, another MARVILOUS story. :)

have i told you how much i love you as an author?

well in another review i did, but hell, no harm in telling you again.

You are by far my FAVORITE most favorite author EVER :)

much love.

-Serena Pickett

Ha, remember me? ;D (I wouldn't be surprised if you didn't that's okay :P)

So it's been a while since I read the old version of this, so I don't know if I caught all of the changes, but I think I got most of them. Overall, I think they made the story better, but there was one part that I think you completely took out, but I can't remember it now...eh, whatever. The changes were good, basically :)

I have to comment on the way you described Yamato again - it's the perfect blend of physical things and expressions, and dialogue. Just how I would expect him to be 8 years after the tv show :D

So yeah, good job...again :)

I really need to check this section more often, I've missed quite a few updates!

Anywho, great story! The ending was very cute and cut it off in a very neat way—not too much information, but not too little. It was lovely.

I'll definitely be looking in to your next story!

Sincerely,

Doragon no Mizu

Cool, I had forgotten that you had DBZ characters as Matt's bandmates. Trunks sure got Matt good LOL!

Hey just one thing, yamato didn't take advantage of kari! He was drunk and she wasnt, it seems to me that she took advantage of him!

Anyway, love the story, keep writing more yakari's fics!