Reviews for Love Hina: Payback
DeadLegion696 chapter 5 . 9/18/2019
You know what they say: Payback is a BITCH!
Pimity chapter 5 . 9/14/2019
I feel the hate stemming from every page. I LOVE IT
Imperial-samaB chapter 5 . 7/14/2019
That was beautiful
Moon Wolf 96 chapter 5 . 7/7/2019
Damn, that was a heavy read. I was warned by the summary, but damn did that go further than I was expecting!
ThatOneGuyUpstairs chapter 5 . 3/18/2019
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Well that escalated quickly
StupidChinaBook chapter 2 . 6/4/2018
is Nabiki the middle sister in Ranma 1/2
WootTwilighterAnimeFanWoot chapter 5 . 11/23/2017
Hwow!
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 2/28/2017
Well damn. Good shit. Very interestingly put together.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Didn't Kentaro cheat too? He got banned as well right?
DredgenVayn chapter 5 . 6/8/2016
As much as I love Naru-bashing, the last bit was kind of overly cruel. To be tortured for years in prison, then die by sickness? Jesus...

Even I'm not that sadistic dude.

I would have just had her kill someone in the prison, then she'd be sentenced to death by hanging or electric chair or something. The torture is just overdoing it. Sorry if you disagree, but hey, it's my opinion, ok?
DredgenVayn chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
I love this story.

Thank you. You put that evil witch in her place!
blukmage19r2 chapter 5 . 4/26/2016
If there were details that were (probably) left off, my guess is that Naru's former family had to find themselves a new home after it was burnt to the ground; at least Keitaro gave them refuge in the dormitory until that's been said and done.
Kitsune recovered after the vicious beating and reminds herself that she is getting less booze from now on, maybe quit drinking them altogether.
The Aoyama family (Motoko; Tsuruko & her husband) moved on with their lives with the sting of betrayal leaving behind them.
Su and Sara are moving on; they are still the best of friends and have learned not to bash Keitaro (or maybe their future boyfriends) so unnecessarily and keep the destructive acts elsewhere from now on.

The Nerima team, after the incident involving Kasumi Tendo, decided that they should bury the hatchet (or should I say hatchets) with each other, but that doesn't mean they the drama would end there; no siree. At least they kept their martial art bouts friendly and from getting out of hand.
Blue Marvel 0 chapter 5 . 12/19/2015
Definitely loved the fight scene between the NWC and Team Hinata versus Naru and her gang. All of the Wreckers teaming up for a common goal is awesome. It was cool that you made Nodoka into an expert or master swordswoman and have her hide her skills all that time from everyone. It was also cool to see Soun out of his funk and fighting again. As for Naru, it's sad to say but she got a lot of what she deserved seeing as she refuses to admit that she was the one in the wrong. This is a great story and I'm glad that Keitaro has moved on.
Sun God Solaris chapter 5 . 9/23/2014
Damn, That's a horrible fate. Oh well she deserved it. And I dont say that often about a woman. In fact thats my first. Overall, She's a bitch. Awesome story with a perfect ending. #coldblooded.
banko54 chapter 5 . 9/9/2014
O.o damn that was harsh. i liked it. this will definitly be going on my favorites list.
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