Reviews for Swingers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() kudos |
![]() ![]() This was fantastic. The dialogue, the jokes, just everything. You kept Derek and Casey in character and the I love you's seemed realistic. Very funny and sweet at the same time. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! both funny and sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is cute. i like the prompt. |
![]() ![]() good. I liked it. |
![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kya! I loved it! Very different, but I loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Hey. I love you.” “Just thought I’d let you know.” Aahh! The best 'i love you' from Derek in all dasey history. Hehee SO cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your fic, it was funny and cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. And Adorable. Annie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Amazing job. Casey was so oblivious, and Derek was so... Derek-ish. I also liked that little Ralph/Emily thing. Oh, and great prompt by the way ;) |
![]() ![]() Absolutly freaking amazing. :D I'd add more, but I don't really see a need too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are turning me into such a Dasey shipper! I don't even watch this show! Curses! *wink* For some reason, I just loved this part. 'Emily giggled. “Thanks Ralph. Maybe you and I can appear on the cover of 80’s Throwback Magazine together.” “That’s what I’m talkin’ about!”' Especially Ralph's line because I just saw Shane in my head in a tux t-shirt, spiked hair, throwing his head back in such a Spinner-esque way. I just giggled. Hee. Also: She crossed her arms and glared at him. “If you said something stupid…I’ll find out. Believe me, I will.” “I don’t doubt it.” He glanced around at the rapidly emptying gym and grabbed her hand, squeezing it. “Hey. I love you.” That just, oh man. I squeed. For real. It was just so awesome and imagining Michael Seater in my head just saying that, being such a sneak and whipping out an I love you like that. Oh boy. Awesome job, babe. I'm off to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...somehow I did not review this fabulous story of yours. I think I wrote up a big, long review when I first read it, but that I was at home and it didn't go through. So somehow, I did not get around to fixing that until now. I don't have to tell you how great you are for you to know that, but I will. You are great and this fic was made of win. Seriously. It needs to be turned into a MOTW and worshipped daily in Hawaii. So the last part, just go with it...it could be anywhere, not just Hawaii. Quite possibly in Saskatoon, which is great too. But you get my point and that is all that matters. I really hope that you have fun on your trip and can't wait to read what you pull out of your magician's hat this time for flashfic because I know it will be just as amazing as all of the others. |