Please write some more, I love this so much!

What? That's one heck of a cliffie! You can finish this right? I really liked this, even though it was an anti-Mary-Sueish character. You did very well keeping it from being annoying and cliche. Liked the songs and some of the creativity like the Wiseman being the old Goblin King and stuff.
I really hope you update even though it's been like over almost 8 years.
Nef

Aw man! You can't leave us hanging at such a moment! D: Please update!

Ugh! You haven't updated since 2008! Why! I LOVE this story so much! please, I know it's a long shot, but please update this story!

And yeah, I hate banana's with a deathly hate/rage.

If a friend gives you fruit it means they betrayed you. XD I love your story but it seems you're not going to write a new chapter. That's to bad... :(

You nailed the whole adventure thing right on the head! Elisa has little to no similarities to Sarah which makes her all the more fun when she's running the Labyrinth. I'm glad someone else out there is more into the adventure of this story than the romance. :) ( though romance is my guilty pleasure XD) haha damn you for your cliff hanger!

ok so I realize that its been more then two years but I'm really hoping you'll update. I haven't enjoyed an OC in Labyrinth stories as much as I've fallen in love with your OC's and I really want to know what happens next. Also while usually I don't like when authors put song lyrics in the stories I actually like how you do it and found myself looking up two of the songs to listened to while reading the section their in. I enjoy how you've been writing Jareth's character and want to see more of him next chapter hopefully if you update so um yeah please update!

Please, please, please, please, write some more! :( this is the best Jareth/OC that I have ever read! I hope you write more! :)

This is a really good story! I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens next! I hope the 50,000 word deal goes well, and that you can come back to the story. :)

Completely and utterly the best labyrinth fanfic I have ever read! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

um...this story is really great! i can't wait to read more. you realise december of 2008 was nearly two years ago, that's a long time for a cliffy.

can we have some more of the kids in the next chapter, i was laughing so hard before that i thought i'd start crying. (note to self: don't read anything labled humour in a public place...Again.)

Update soon please!

Please continue! This is awesome

PLEASE write another chapter...this story is actually very interesting...I would hate to see it halted another few years.

GOD BLESS!

Hikari

Well snap! I can't wait for the next chappie!

BlackRose

Ah! Cliff hanger! Well, I really like this story and I'm a bit apprehensive because you haven't updated it in a long while. I have to admit, usually I don't read stories that haven't been updated for a long time. But this story grabbed my attention. You rarely see any Jareth/OC on here; it's always Jareth/Sarah even thoughits most likely that she'd never want to see him again. Anyways, I'm rambling again. Please update soon! BYEZZ! P.S. I hate peaches and animal crackers rock. ~Shadow