You do know that they're not actually elven right? Even though both are immortal, there are differences between the two. By the way, you should update as soon as you can, since it sounds like a really interesting story. Unless, of course, you're not interested anymore, sick, or you could possibly be dead. Anyways, update soon?

It's wonderful to finally be able to match a personality to Uyulala after seeing her depicted in your art. This is a great beginning, and you're making a lot of progress with your English. If this is the translated version of the story, I can only imagine how eloquent it would be in its original language. My review is a few months late, but I hope you're still writing!