Reviews for Break Time: A Toyomi Short Story Series
Demdrops chapter 8 . 9/30/2018
loved this.
Demdrops chapter 7 . 9/30/2018
so sweet
Demdrops chapter 6 . 9/30/2018
awww
Demdrops chapter 5 . 9/30/2018
I enjoyed it. :3
Demdrops chapter 4 . 9/30/2018
nice
Demdrops chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
I like it so far, keep it up.
Demdrops chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
very nice
e8t2A chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
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James Birdsong chapter 8 . 5/4/2018
Lovely two stories
FarnesyFudge chapter 8 . 5/2/2018
I'm so happy to see the queen of Toyomi return! I haven't checked out Raison' in a while, but I'm happy to see it, and you, are still going strong.
I wish you the best, and hope to see more from you!
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 11/1/2015
Nice stories.
Who were the Precursors chapter 6 . 7/11/2009
Another great Toyomi story! I loved every bit of this.
Neo-byzantium chapter 6 . 9/12/2008
Nice stories.

I like how Tomo in her own way managed to get Yomi to lay off the harmful diets in chapter 2.

I also like how Yomi helped restore Tomo's confidence in chapter 6. I didn't think badly about Kagura for chewing out Tomo though. She was merely coming to Yomi's aid and working to stop Tomo from hurting people's feelings.

If I were in that class, I'd be tempted to do the same thing and would try to get Tomo to stop picking on Chiyo-chan.

Anyways, good job.
Just-call-me-Mar chapter 6 . 7/17/2008
I enjoyed them very much...anything involving Yomi enjoyment from the Mar! Well..provided she survives...*contemplates a previous story I read* The up-beat nature of your stories is always appreciated.
BioDragon chapter 6 . 6/6/2008
All these shorts are cute. :)
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