Good one-shot

beast.

It was really well written and displayed the characters really nicely in that timeline. I'm not fond of the couple, or pairing but in this fiction I really didn't mind.

Very good. I missed this when it was first posted because I only ever hover in the Gohan section and this is tagged only as Bulma. I'm glad I managed to find it.

You know, with the number of times I've read this story, you'd think I would have reviewed it by now! I guess I'm just lazy.

Anyway, I abso-bloody-lutely love this story. It's so well written, and it's well-written in a way that I can just read it over and over and over again. Which I have, actually. Only one other person has done that and she's a professional author, believe it or not. As far as I'm concerned, that puts you up there with the big dogs. I hope that you have more story ideas holed up in that brilliant brain of yours!

Toodles!

~texaspeach

this isn't a pairing I'm fond of, but you made it very believable. Awesome:)

This is a well-written story. You kept Bulma and Gohan in character and made their relationship believable; this isn't just a sad attempt at randomly pairing them off for the sake of randomly pairing them off. I personally shiver at the idea of Bulma getting together with Gohan - pedophilia much? - but my preference is irrelevant. Good job.