A beautiful thing is your writing, delicate and graceful like the soft tones of a lullaby.

So expressive, so beautiful...

Beautiful not-quite-poetry. It reminds me of water, liquid dancing with the light.

To enjambament

Ah, wonderful. I enjoy a well-done piece of prose, such as this, and particularly with such a lightly engrained plot.

Well done

CW

This is simply beautiful.

I honestly cannot think of another word for this, not other than beautiful. This is... wow. Thank you.

This was amazing. Thank you.

This was recently recced on accio_rs_fics. I'm so glad that read it; this is excellent. I always love James' perspective on R/S, and this was exceedingly well done. Favoriting!

Gorgeous. As in, gorgeous-enough-to-induce-gaping-at-that-wonderful-ending type of gorgeous.

I love the 'poetic-rambling' thing you had going on; very profound and thoughtful and carried by its own current, which I thought was lovely :) Seeing James' observations on serious matters was great, and I loved that whole thing about Sirius and Remus' healing ritual, and their magics. So interesting and really touching.

Fantastic idea/writing, well done! :)

ah, this is GORGEOUS!

absolutely love it 3

Wow, this was simply amazing! I've never read a story quite like this, but I was hanging on every word!

this is really lovely. you are fast becoming one of my favourite authors :)

Beautiful. Just ... Beautiful.

Thank you.

i don't know why i didn't find this story sooner! it's beautiful and beautifully written. i really liked how you described their dueling styles. good stuff.

This is most certainly one of the most beautiful things I've read in a long long time. Thank you.