This story is incredible. I read it all in one sitting. It is very in character, realistic and faithful to the show. (_)

It's great to see Alison recovering and making a friend, I love Olivia by the way and I'm glad Alison wasn't left alone. I never did like Barb, so I'm glad someone else sees her as I do.

Olivia is a great character as she is sympathetic for the audience and she is flawed in a way that makes her a more human character.

It would be great for Alison to see Robert at some point, just to see how she would deal with seeing him after what's happened. I might just be acting all soppy, but I would like to see Alison and Robert together as a romantic item, admitting their feelings for eachother.

Hopefully I've given you some useful feedback. Hope to read more of Alison and Olivia's adventures soon.

this is really good, i like how Alison and Olivia help each other deal with their grief )

Liked your story!

I like this story alot, please don't stop writing.