I'm a total Sana shipper, so I enjoyed this immensely even though they didn't wind up together. Nicely written.

i love it

omg, I love you.

so serious. there is a severe lack of good Jana fic, and you have written my favorite! the 'Trilogy' (ok so i ignore the last one :p) is fantastic. PLEASE GOD PLEASE write more Jana!

(also I love you even more for Chark!

Oo! New Ana Lucia/Sawyer fic! Yays!

"Her skin was a caramel heaven surrounded by the white of the sand, and her hair a sea of black curls spread out around her." Really like this description!

"...the blood-boiling jealousy towards Jack when Sawyer had hurried to where the doctor was tending to the policewoman and saw them looking at each other that way." Aw! Poor Sawyer.

"Sawyer and Freckles had finally gotten together in the polar bear cages." EW! I need to wash my brain with a brillow pad, now!

"...the fiery Latina girl half his size who could knock him out cold with one punch." Haha! Too true!

"she had been the first one to find them, and the disappointment in her face when she realized that he’d escaped and Jack was still with the Others had turned Sawyer cold" Okay, so maybe I'm just being thick here, but I'm a little confused. Which "she" is this now, the Fiery Latina, or Kate? I think it's Ana Lucia being disappointed that Jack was still in captivity?

"I might be pregnant...But I can still kick your ass if you don’t stop bugging me." BAHAHAHAHA!

"...the woman that wouldn’t leave Sawyer’s thoughts, dreams, and fiercest fantasies." Oo! Great description there!

"I was bored and looking to darken someone’s day." Hehehe.

"...imagining that he could just lower himself to the blanket and take her as his without her complaint." You should, Sawyer. Just go for it.

"His smirk turned roguish, looking down at the only object he wished to steal and keep forever, baby bump and all." This fic is just one great line after another!

"Go and bother someone else, Sawyer. My morning sickness is enough without throwing you into the mixture" Omg, that's perfect Ana Lucia!

"He surprised even himself by lowering himself to her blanket and sitting by her feet, hugging his knees slightly as he looked down at her, wishing he could cover her with his body and taste those luscious, pouty lips." Do it! Just do it!

"Charlie tried to sing one of his group’s songs and messed up terribly." Oh my. I'd like to see that.

Great song! Musically, it's a little cheesy, but I love the lyrics - very poetic! Sort of reminds me of Neruda. And where'd you find the translation? I think there are one or two grammatical errors, but otherwise, it's pretty good.

"It was as if Ana had read his innermost thoughts, the desires he’d denied and refused to admit were there for her, and was telling him what he desperately wanted to tell her." AW!

"Her voice rose slightly at the chorus of the unfamiliar song which spoke the words of his much-ignored heart." Yet another great line. I especially like the description of Sawyer's heart.

"His jaw clenched. Fear was a good thing. Fear kept you from doing a lot of stupid things...like going to that damned woman, throwing away their bottles of scotch and claiming those lips-if only to stop the words coming from her mouth." Do it! GO!

Oh! Poor Sawyer, having to watch Jack find Ana Lucia in the jungle! See? I told you should have gone for it! I do find it a little odd that Sawyer wouldn't act on impulse, though. On the other hand, he'd probably be afraid to act on unfamiliar feelings, so I guess I can see that, too.

"...the drunk Latina with a killer right hook and the voice of an angel." Haha!

"'What exactly do you want?'/You." :-D

"Both he and Kate had realized around the same time that what’d happened between them in the cages hadn’t really meant anything." Well, duh! But we still had to suffer through it, didn't we? Stupid Lost writers! (not you, shadowglove!)

"He refused to budge." Now *there's* the stubborn, "I get what I want" attitude I associate with Sawyer!

"She was beautiful when she laughed." Aw!

"Locke has got to be the most masculine man on this whole Island." And yet, he seems to be attracted more to the men on the island...

"Sawyer scowled at her for not putting him on the list" - and, there's Sawyer's cockiness - "...but the scowl turned into a smirk when he realized who else hadn’t been mentioned." and his competitiveness. YESS!

Oh, my. The way you describe Sawyer's jealousy of the life Ana Lucia has with Jack. And of course, followed by banter. Just wonderful! And, normally I have a really hard time seeing Ana Lucia and Jack in anything long-term, but the way you portray it here, I can see it working. Ironic that it's through Sawyer's eyes, too, though it also makes me wonder that maybe what Sawyer sees isn't everything that's actually there.

"...this was the banter he wanted with her. This was a conversation he’d dreamt of them having-and it’d ended up with him finally telling her the truth and making love to her." You're not the only one dreaming, Sawyer!

"Too bad Jack always had to ruin things for him." Don't I know it!

"Sawyer was used to getting what he wanted, to seeing a treasure and taking it in the dark of the night, or coveting a gem and somehow conning it from right out of the hands of its rightful owner-making it his forever." Woah. That is an awesome description!

Loved this. LOVED it. The dialogue, spaced out by Sawyer's musings. Some really great lines, spot-on descriptions. Your writing is really great! I mean, forget teh k8, or Ana Lucia - you're in Sawyer's head!

I sincerely hope this isn't over - or that you'll at least write more Ana Lucia/Sawyer fic.

P.S. Oh, I see at the bottom here that you did the translation. Nice work!

absolutely loved it! i hope that you consider doing more!

Oh my God! That was awesome! xDD