Reviews for Once Upon a Golden Afternoon |
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/20/2014 Continue |
Patrick de chapter 9 . 7/14/2013 Oh dear lord do I wish there was more. Granted it's been four years from the last update and it seems bleak there shall be another but I hope there is another chapter somewhere saved to your computer because this story is just wonderful. |
Devin Trinidad chapter 9 . 11/24/2012 Man, you're an amazing writer indeed! Are you going to post another chapter, or is this the end? From what I can tell, you characterized the people in the story meticulously (Bert is now my favorite! lol) and there are no grammatical mistakes. However, is there going to be any pairings with Alice because I see a lot of things happening between Alice and Bert. *wink wink nudge nudge* Whatever you do, keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/30/2012 Awesome! Do you know when you'll be releasing the next chapter? -Soulreaperforlife |
Mtsr chapter 1 . 2/1/2011 Ej:HOLY PEGUINS I LIKE THIS STORY! White rabbit:pills! Alice:*hands pills* Ej:Wow,cant wait to read more.. |
NeoLunaAngel chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 This story is fantastic. I've been reading it for years now. Please finish it if you have the chance. Even a quick and dirty ending would tie it up for your biggest fan. You are an excellent writer! |
Green Sea Blossom chapter 9 . 6/2/2010 I like how you wrote this, it's a more realistic version of Alice in Wonderland, and it's just so...good! Hehe, Sorry if I sound weird, but I really like your story! |
AlyssaRuin chapter 9 . 3/7/2010 But how does she know that it's them? Anyway, LOVE the story. You MUST continue! |
ForgottenReveries chapter 9 . 2/19/2010 This story IS AWESOME! Fantastic, I love it, its confusing unless I reread then it makes sense, but anyway love it. Update soon cause its really killing me to know whats gonna happen next. |
FromTheWindowSeat chapter 9 . 1/18/2010 I love this story and these characters, the emotions, and the haunting way you write. Fabulous! :) :) :) |
CraZy-InsanNe995 chapter 9 . 12/28/2009 Aw i loved it! please update soon! Sorry but do you think you could help me with the names of the people and the characters they are with. e.g. Mad Hatter is... White Rabbit is... March Hare is... What are the names of the people/bodys they are in/posseses? I keep loosing track of who is who...:( please help me! P.s. although i keep getting there names confuzed i realy do like your story and i wish you would update son! |
The One Who Dwells In Darkness chapter 9 . 11/14/2009 I really, really like your story, please update it soon! It's cruel to deprive us of your excellent writing. But please add some happy! It's been rather depressing thus far. I still love it though! |
Winter Ink chapter 9 . 10/18/2009 AH! My heart cries to Alice. You better make her happy soon Pash! lovely writing though. much angst so far. o-O hope not going to be a angst ridden story. update soon! :) |
oxygen deprived chapter 1 . 10/11/2009 Wow. Purely amazing. |
Alice-In-Wonderland101 chapter 9 . 9/5/2009 Ahh you updated *dies of happiness* thank you |