i am actually in love with this story:)

Lovely last sentence... hehe. love this story xox

It's really good, keep on writing stories! :)

Beautiful story. I love the relationship that you portrayed between Bellatrix and Voldemort. It was perfect. Well done.

I like this story very,very much, as the Bellatrix fan I am :)

The last chapter is so sad, I almost cried :(

I absolutely loved this story!

Never underestimate your enemy. I recall a famous witch who was killed by an eight year old girl with a bucket of water. And there's nothing that matches the grief and anger of a mother who's lost her child. Mrs. Weasley is someone who brings life to the world. Who creates and nurtures life. Who has raised a large family of very fine children. Bella is the direct opposite. Someone who hates and destroys life. A very satisfying ending to a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Bella is praying to Voldemort. It is as Chesterton wrote, When someone stops believing in God it doesn't mean that they believe in nothing. It means that they believe anything. Now her prayers have been answered. Her messiah has returned.

A good contrast between the two sisters. Bella the strong fanatic and Narcissa, not as committed. It is the same as in the Battle of Hogwarts where Bella was willing to give her life for the Dark Lord and Narcissa just loved her son and wanted to find him.

I thought that the Longbottoms were tortured to try to find the location of Neville. A threat to the Dark Lord. Could be wrong though. I would have loved to see more of the torture scene as fond of the Longbottoms as I am. Bella's decending further into evil and madness. Her worship of Lord Voldemort's becoming a form of religious fanaticism.

I thought it was interesting that much like Jesus Christ, Lord Voldemort is offering eternal life to his followers. Unlike Jesus, he is lying. I don't believe he has any intention of giving out the secret of horocruxes to anyone.

I did enjoy the profiles of Voldemort's followers. What a horrible group of losers. I also tend to believe the kiss was a chaste one to the forehead because he knows what Bella wants and has a perverse desire to deny her.

dark and beautiful, a wonderful story of bellatrix and tom riddle

the title is such a perfect fit...the dance of the dead from the black death, amazing planning.

AWESOME STORY!

Wonderful work!

I enjoyed every moment of it!

Can't wait to read more of what you offer in later days to come!

Keep writing,

-Felicia

I love how you're handling a young Bella. Small incidents such as the things you provided within the first two chapters, are already cause and effect examples as to why she turned out the way she has. Great story so far.

-Felicia

I can understand why Bella wouldn't be interested in having children. And not just because she should never be anywhere near her or anybody elses kids. Motherhood is about nurturing new life and Bella is totally against life. Even if the pregnancy went normally she would probably have found some way of aborting the child simply so she wouldn't have to be burdened with caring for the little brat. She can't allow anything to get between her and Voldemort including her husband.