i like how the boys snuggled together. this was nicely done.

but i do have a couple of questions about your premise. why wasn't jack using the pup tent? i would have thought it would have kept him somewhat dry, though with it being open on both ends, i'm not too sure how much help it would really be. secondly, wouldn't jack have had a horse? he needed one to get up to the sheep in the first place and one to patrol the herd. and finally, this one has no answer i know, why would ennis have gone after jack? i mean if you can't change it you gotta stand it; why would ennis have thoght to go after jack...unless that is he has some strong feelings for him at this point. i'm still glad ennis went after jack, it gives a nice warm feeling.

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AWW. i luved it. Those two are just too cute together. ;3 This is such a great story. great job.

Nah. The rating can stay at T. Now about the fic: I realy really really enjoyed it! Nothing out of the ordinary happened, just a stormy night, but it was sweet how the events played out. The two POV's were helpful here, and I like the ending: "He likes that Ennis Del Mar." It makes me smile.

Again, great fic! :)

RIP Heath Ledger.

Hm, now that would have been interesting - Ennis being more the agressor than Jack.

Ok, one question though - what happened to the other horse?

Thanks for the story. bob

o XD They were in a tent together! whats gonna happen next? o

Oh my gosh. This was a really great story. Thanks for sharing it. Don't apologize for the swearing-in case no one noticed-Ennis and Jack didn't exactly watch their language. ;)

Thanks.

Jen

Aw, that was sweet! And I am ever so upset about heath dying and your little note at the beginning made me get all tearful.

Cute! Go on...