Reviews for Addicted to a Cherry Blossom |
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melani18aguayo chapter 10 . 1/25/2019 ... Eso fue intenso... |
OnnaMurcielago666 chapter 2 . 11/26/2016 Okay... I'm really sorry you're busy, but maybe you should go through your works more slowly. It isn't as if you're making huge mistakes, but there is capitalization in the middle of sentences, and run-on sentences, and a few other smaller grammar errors happening that are really make or break factors to a good story. There is a huge demand for updates and new chapters, but it is more rewarding for you and your readers for you to double check things. Auto-correct won't always catch them because it is aiming for the basics and spelling first, so sometimes you have to go a sentence at a time yourself. Your story really pulls me in, and you're excellent at making me want to read more, but the little errors really pull you out of the story. I trip up, and read them over again, and end up losing a lot of the mood you're going for. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
jhian casey chapter 9 . 7/21/2015 damn! love this chap! so much happened! im so waiting for that foursome between saku, itachi, dei and sasori! that gonna be so HOT! (pls male it happen! LOL) and let's not forget about neji and kakashi! hahah saku-chan you're so lucky!;) |
jhian casey chapter 8 . 7/21/2015 what does itachi offers her?! im excited for the sequel! hahah im also a kakasaku fan so, im eager to know about their kiss.. as well as naruto's.. heheh |
jhian casey chapter 7 . 7/21/2015 neji is so cute! hahaha but i hope sakura won't betray konoha.. she can still mess around with ita-dei-saso without betraying the leaf.. it'll be fun! hahah damn, you gotta give saku-chan longer moments with the boys one by one.. |
jhian casey chapter 6 . 7/21/2015 i love sasori and sakura's little moment..heheh so, sakura didn't slept with dei-kun.. they just kissed.. well, that's disappointing.. now, im just curious with what happened between ita-kun and saku-chan.. |
jhian casey chapter 5 . 7/21/2015 you know you gotta share with us dei and saku-chan's history.. and ita-kun and saku's too! im really curious! the way you're hinting, she seems to have slept with the two.. |
jhian casey chapter 4 . 7/21/2015 your dialogues are really funny! i love it!;) |
jhian casey chapter 1 . 7/21/2015 nice first chap! and your grammar and spelling is improving..heheh |
Mun-ninn chapter 1 . 6/30/2015 leave kakashi and sakura together, hahah ok no |
Neko chapter 5 . 2/15/2015 Why does deidara keeps saying yeah |
love chapter 10 . 12/13/2014 oh my good i love it why dont you write more about this story :'( i found this story like to day and i allredy like dying to know more and i love the story so far dont change anything i love all the cuples all time when its sakura i love sasori and her sauske and her and itachi and her osv. but it would be hilarius if naruto and neji was more in to her xD 3333333333333333 |
summerg1 chapter 10 . 12/13/2014 XD WOW DEIDARA WOW! |
Fluttershy 2059123 chapter 10 . 1/9/2014 That was interesting...good job though, can't wait to read the sequel! |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/9/2014 lmafo is all I have to say |