An intriguing start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been enjoyable. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

I dont quite know what to make of this story. Intriguing and crazy all at once. Took me a bit to get used to the random skips of time with no indicator.

This is such a well crafted story.

I am enjoying this. The slytherins are human and sharp. Sarcasm rules. Instead I find myself hating the gryffandors.

LOVELY

INTERESTING

just because 8 out of 10 death eaters were slytherin and its namesake was the birthmother of pureblood supremacy does not mean that slytherin house should be judged by its members ... there were decent people in there ... somewhere ... at the Battle of Hogwarts there were like two or three slytherin students on the inside fighting against the thousands of slytherin students attacking the school...

I love this. Wonderful mischief.

What exactly does "orchard blossom" smell like? Since an orchard can have any type of fruit tree in it, orchard blossom is a very vague name which tells us absolutely nothing. Also, "in fact" is two words. You seem to believe it's a single word; at least, you write it that way. It's not.

I am finding it very hard to follow your conversations.
I can't tell if the missing punctuation is the problem or if the words themselves make it feel stilted.

I love this story. I discovered it by chance yesterday and am now properly sleep deprived. What a great writing style, it’s totally captivating. I’m really hoping you’ve written more

I hated the staff in this, although Snape was tolerable.
Thanks for a good read.

All this bullying by the staff is so depressing to read about

My head hurts... anyone else baffled? Well, colour me baffled... I can't believe I read it all and still don't have a clue what was going on... Why was everyone hating Harry? Ok, so we all know Wizard kind are Daft Morons, but even a bit of explanation would help! I don't understand, and I still don't understand. It was like, 'He was tied to the table, cut and bleeding... then he jumped out the window and escaped.' HOW? How did he get untied and escape? It left me feeling frustrated and confused... why, even with all the evidence saying they were wrong, did they refuse to believe? I need an explanation of what was causing the twist. I'm scared to read the sequel, my brain may melt and run out my ears... Ok, it was interesting. Like a train wreck or a car crash... I think they call it 'fascination of the horrible'... you just can't look away...

Going to read the sequel but seriously... How are they still professors? The news of Harry Potter, the boy-who-lived, dead in Hogwarts, I'm surprised Cornelius did not arrest McGonagall and Dumbledore