Best one-shot ever! Thank you!

*squee* I would've loved for this to be longer with Vegeta and Bulma going further beyond kissing but it's lovely just the same. Also, I find it adorable that Vegeta knew Bulma was in the tub the whole time he was stripping down and just kinds let her ogle him or maybe save them both them from an awkward situation by pretending he couldn't feel/sense her there. Hahaha. That was fun to read.

Wonderful! From a writing professor, this is amazingly well written. I wish even half of my students could use imagery the way you have.

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Needed this after the day I've had this just made it 100 times better thx man thx

Very good piece of work this is, I have to say!

It's hard to find a story of this kind without it feeling forced, to fast, or (this doesn't happen so often) to slow. This was at a Goldilocks speed and felt very natural. It also was quite the interesting read, and I have to say this version of the beginning of the famous Bulma and Vegeta love story will stay a prominent in influencing how I think of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship.

(I'm thinking of making my own version, and yours certainly has gotten me thinking up a few good ideas. :] )

This was absolutely 100% amazing. The discribtivness of it all almost made me feel like I was actually there. 6 stars out of 5!

Almost fainted... Gaaah I love Vegeta! :) Great story!

Awesome just awesome

Well written, entertaining and incredibly hot. Loved it.

Ooooooh! Hot! Lol

I loved this one shot, the writing and pacing are beautiful and I wanted it to go on but it ended perfectly. You're very talented in weaving words that make me squeal 3

Do go on...

totally awesome;) love the last part vegeta was so sneaky.I give this 5 stars

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