It's been a while since I checked this story, and I'm glad I did.

man, i was waiting for a kiss. oh well, it was still incredibly awesome. i dont think i could have spent two hours reading if it wasnt. i look forward to your next update

I can't believe I didn't review this back then.

Nice work as always, TrueGamer. The way you twisted Luin around to make such a wonderful reading experience is very masterful.

I'm not quite certain what I can say to add more to that, because, in my opinion, your story didn't have any serious flaws at all.

Until next time,

GM

I was about as giddy as a schoolgirl when I saw the "New Chapter" e-mail in my inbox. And I must say, you do not disappoint. Loved this chapter as much as the first, and I hope to read more of your work later.

That was great! I felt like I was watching an amazing cutscene of action! One of the best Sheloyd fanfics ive read...ever!

I've read this story 5 times already and I never get tired of it. Seriously man make that sequel. It would be so awesome.

YES! Please, this is the best SheenaxLloyd fic I've read (no, I'm not sucking up just to get you to continue; this is my real opinion, and I'm a perfectionist!)

Excellent! I love the slight twist in the story! Are you planning on doing more?

Sequals are good things 3 write one please!

Being a Shelloyd fan I am, I found this to be a enjoyable read. It wasn't just the Shelloyd stuff that made this enjoyable but the imagery too. The Mayor's death was accurate to the real story that took place in the game and the fact it was so dramatic was epic. It actually makes me wish this happened in the real game.

this was very good, please do make the sequal. i was so sad when this one ended. cant wait to read the sequal, if you write it.

Do it!

-whistles- Woah. LONG... But well done all the same. Kudos. -bows-

Good job, guy.

Very nice... I think you should continue on. You could not only make a sequel, but you could continue it further and create a whole story. Just some food for thought.