well it was a bit strange and Sakura didn't seem to find getting married very interesting and instead just accepted it as a condition. (Which is kinda what happened) but she didn't llook forward to it like she would have in the anime.

Well i really like it. Love the ending but i reackon you should have wrote something in the beginning like 'nobody would see the scares...' or something like that but this story is great how it is!

Aw so great! You should make a part 2 too it please!-

WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THAT? FIRST YOU MADE IT SO ANGSTY AND THEN GAVE IT A FLUFFY ENDING. IT LEAVES THE PEOPLE UNSATISFIED EVEN WHEN YOUR STORY IS WELL WRITTEN. THE STORY STARTED WITH GREAT POTENIAL BUT BY THE TIME IT REACHED THE ENDING IT WAS COMPLETELY RUINED. HAPPY ENDINGS AREN'T ESSENTIAL YOU KNOW.

lol i luved it!

The story had great potential. It started out well, I especially liked the beginning with the young Sasuke and Sakura bit (that could almost be a story of its own).

However, then it got way too extreme with all of the ninjas protecting her on every little thing. It was also very rushed and just continued with the extremeness at the end with Sakura becoming leader and then just saying, "Oh, what the heck, I'm returning with no consequences just because Sasuke asked." And what about her parents?

Like I said, the beginning was great, but then when the protectivness started, it was too much. The idea of Sasuke protecting her smile is a very cute idea - albiet out of character, but you can still make him more subtle about it. Keep going at it :)

lol its cooli :]

why did it have to end happy?

AW THATS CUTE OF HOW LITTLE SASUKE WAS TREATING SAKURA!

YAY! A story! I like it so far! It sounds like it will be good! Please update soon!

*gives 2 cookies and a hug*

Keep it up!

Wow that was one long story. It was so cute when sasuke said he protected sakura because he wanted to protect her smile. so sweet. love the ending (: