I love this pairing! Write more about them, please!

very cute :) it's little moments like this that make me enjoy reading stories about these two :D great job!

Nice. I like how he kinda has a soft spot fpr her. He even lended his hat to her wow! Very sweet loved it alot!

Awesome. I just want you to know how awesome this is. Your writing is concise, descriptive, and grammatically correct. You capture the characters perfectly. This story uses all that to show clearly something between Elizabeth and Barbossa that we could have guessed at from watching the movies, but couldn't have been sure about. I love it.

A great story. Very good.

So cool! I so wish this was in the third movie.

Good Job

While definitely an interesting read I was more than once irritated by your obvious lack of beta. There are quite a few slips of the pen and it ruins the flow of a story that otherwise would have left me with a smile and a chuckle. You write well, but it's a bit sloppy. I hope you'll go over this again and repost a proof written version, because it really is an interesting and nice little story.

Interesting

Great job! Loved the ending. :)

Well done.

Keep writing. soupie ~.

That was wonderful! Great job, you!

I liked this. I'm not much a Barbossabeth, either, but it was enjoyable. Hector seemed the tiniest bit out of character to me. Then again, he is a rather difficult fellow to write and when involving him in romantic endeavors, he usually is OOC. Anyway, bravo, well done, kudos, and all that jazz. You get a thumbs up from me. db

Love this Ficlet. none too partial to barbossa/beth.. but this was cute

Awsome! I loved it! Favorites list! :)

I loved it!