I wish diana would play hard to get sometimes. she seems too desperate with her behavior. I hate hate that she constantly shows her feelings to bruce but he plays it cool. why the hell he has to be so physical with emily...maybe he may feel something about flash and diana...hope.

grrr, how I hate bm being so aloof about his feelings for diana. how can she stand it? I want him to show her hoe much he lobes her. I hate his demeanor like he always have to have the upper hand on love. hate it.

I like the story, but the whole thing feels so confusing... All the characters keep implying things as if they're obvious but no one ever actually clarifies what everyone is supposed to be able to see... Was this whole thing supposed to be Bruce showing Diana that although they undoubtedly have feelings for each other, it can't work if they want to maintain Bruce's secret identity? (as well as others) and Diana never understood this until now with the Flash thing? So she 'fixed' all of this by ending the official relationship but we're still on good terms? This took me a while to try to piece together and even now I'm not even sure if I got the right idea... Maybe once in a the characters could clarify what the unspoken thing that is happening between them once in a while?

Thank you for a beautiful story. I just wish it was a slightly happier ending.

I love this chapter! Full of humor and romance. Although I'm not clear on what Diana has fixed.

Bravo, adn wonderwoman needs more tact then that, if you are going to do something like that, write a speech that isn't incriminating

A .Brilliant .Story . You have a great future before you . Thanks for the story .

Its so hard to find decent stories when it comes to the Justice League, especially with how tied every super hero category is with each other. That being said, this was beautiful. Each Character was done very well, and seemed to really flow. The subtlety, the hilarity, the touch of genius to it, even. Well done, my friend, well done.

-halfbreed

OMG! YOU GO GIRL! ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT FOR OVER AN HOUR READING THIS! Plz tell me if/when the sequel comes out! THIS IS SWEET!

Dun dun duuuunnnn ... I want to read what you've set up here!

Nice wrap up to a satisfying tale, thanks for sharing

I like the level of detail in your writing, that bit about women's centre of gravity, and in earlier chapters the description you gaveof a situation which would attract corporate espionage ... Good stuff

This plot is really engaging, I'm racing through it !

Fun. Of course, Flash looked like an asshole to make WW cry like that. But something had to give.

That was awesome.

Flash first being a horndog about an island full of angelic women. Then not wanting to kiss Diana.

And Diana getting the surprise of her week when she realized Flash the guy who always looks to date hot women doesn't want to kiss her.