This was so incrediably sad at the end! Poor Severus, he loves her and she totally was awfull to him. I mean, I can understand her anger that he used lagilmency on her, but really, he tried to explain himself and she was just awful to leave him like that. I feel like bashing the Marauders' heads together (Remus included surprisingly)! Poor Severus. Beautiful work! Sounds like an incident that could have happened. Wish there was more to the story, but it's great the way it is.

Il ove how she told them off! NIce dialouge!

Ep...one day. Severus can be really creepy when he wants too...

Makes me shudder.

awesome so far... update soon please!

oh poor sevvy... of course that last sentence was rather creepy though *shudder*

lol i love lilys temper so good:D

Interesting! I wonder, where is this going?

Oh! I like it so far. But I think that last comment might send Lily on a "I can take care of myself" rampage...or not. I don't know. Love it so far!

waah cliffie :(...

but this is so wonderfully written it makes me feel like even if JKR doesnt write any more harry potter i still have you guys

update soon i wanna find what happens with the cliffie

aww i love the line "the marauder's girl" that just sounds so sweet UPDATE SOON really soon!