Okay, that was sort of confusing. But nicely done.

That's... that's... amazing.

I LOVES IT, MDEAR. (:

keep up the good work. ;D

i love this! i have no idea what i just read, but i love this! i like your style of writing.

I am incredibly sorry I didn't review this sooner, I've been busy lately. Baby duty. Kylie has a very long tongue that she sticks out all the time, and licks me with when I dressing her. I've gotten into the habit of teasing Alicia, that Orochimaru fathered her baby, even though its impossible, just so I can see her eye twitch and my mom turn green with envy. 3 Oh, and at eleven days old, Kylie already enjoys watching anime. 3 Anyway, this was brilliant. A very good idea with an amazing theme. Then there is just your use of the language. I love this to death, and I'm going to favorite it because it made my stomach churn due to its awesome-ness. I just ate six oreos and now I feel sick. Rawr. 3

Cheers!

Even though I am not fond of KakaSaku, this one needs a fave if just for that last line...And the circumstance is really creative ,believable (in a fandom sense), and perfect for brining out the parts of Sakura's character that you brought out. Everything just fit so well together and,as usual, you have those lines that seem like they don't fit in but actually do and very much so...those are always my favorite because they're usual a little detail that serves some literary purpose in a sneaky way...:3 "it's always fit rather snugly.-For that same reason, it's Kakashi's favorite shirt too." I thought that was a perfect beginning. Overall, this was just flawless. Excellent, excellent! A 100!

-S