an interesting start! a real shame no progess has been made in so long...

well the nidaime did create the hiraishin so..
And I definitely agree that they're awesome, and a lot of writers don't do them justice, whether it be their character, personality, attitude, ability, or etc., especially Tobirama. It's even annoying if some writers portray him so far from what his characterization is.

In canon History it was the Nidaime Hokage that created the Hiraishin. The fourth Hokage only adopted it and used the original notes as a guide to improve on the original idea. so while I agree the yondaime was a genius in his own right it was truly the Nidaime that practically handed the yondaime his fame. So I agree with you. The Nidaime is seriously discredited by FanFiction writers all the time. And the Shodaime could grow a giant wood golem to create the valley of the end, yondaime couldn't do shit like that. To Shodaime and Nidaime, you have our respect.

your team is shit i dont read fanfiction for a naruto abused by his teammates

Actually turns out you were right XD The nidaime is where the fourth got all his sealing ideas and perfected them. Nice future sight ya got their man.

I like to think that the nidaime was good with seals, he did make the Hiroshima prototype, and the incarnation jutsu that orochimaru uses, I can't remember the name for some reason.

Please, please, please update SOON!

i just read the an in the beggining and already i like rhis story

The Nidaime was a seal master... I mean realy if making a seal that brings people back from the dead doesen't make you a seal master what does?

I first read this story before I even HAD a FanFiction account. You have NO idea how long it took for me to track it back down. Considering the fact that the last update was in 2008, I doubt we'll be seeing any more. Still, this was a very promising start to what was shaping up to be an awesome story.

I've read this a few times. My only complaint is that your muse hasn't forced you to write about 10x as much on this one.

This is a nice fic. Naruto has his thing. He isn't over powered. He is skilled within his area though. When you assign him a team, they aren't OC OP either. They are rather raw material that can grow with the right teacher, which you assign them.

I rather like that you avoided the normal genin team. I actually like the idea of the team going into ANBU rather than other areas. I've read a few good fics like that.

You've kept the tone of this just right though with enough humor so that it isn't a heavily serious fic. They bond well. I just wish you can finish up with that C rank mission of theirs. It just begs for more.

So either possession, since he knew Fumio's name; or replacement, since he didn't want anyone to go back there, and possibly see the REAL Turo's body.
I keep mixing up Turo and Toko, since their names are so similar

*follows*
Maybe one day. One day...

I'm so fucking confused.. but judging from all the other reviews, I think its safe to say its just me.

Lol the nidaime was I fact a master of seals the hiraishin was his jutsu before the fourth perfected it