Reviews for Defender of Beauxbatons
Rodaani Stone chapter 3 . 7/19
You were right. It is ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
I like this but beauxbatons is NOT an all girls school
tdc369 chapter 5 . 6/8
Hello, any timeline when this story gets picked up again?
ripper34 chapter 5 . 6/8
Good story
DarthFlores chapter 1 . 6/5
No offense but anyone who is still asking for the store to be updated... y’all just gotta give up. I mean This story’s been abandoned since 2008. I’m pretty sure the author isn’t even on anymore.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 5 . 5/29
So have you been working on this story any more?
AnimeAsim chapter 1 . 5/7
Not abandoning the story eh its beens 11 and half years including corona right now and still no new chapter. Pity
Caliban03 chapter 5 . 3/2
Interesting point of view! Waiting for updates :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3
The hymen thing is a misogynistic myth. Please fact check before you write.
jimmylee220 chapter 5 . 11/28/2019
It's be 11 years you have been a coward. Finish it
Russ chapter 5 . 10/10/2019
Coward that was 11 years ago, Finish it!
ClearEyes chapter 5 . 8/6/2019
I know that this story hasn't been updated in over 10 years, and I am writing this assuming your writing has improved during this decade, and yet I would like to give you some feedback on this particular story that I hope will help your writing endeavors.
For starters, I feel there is not a lot of "show-don't-tell" when it comes to Harry's experience at Beuxbatons. We have a lot of characters telling us what happened with some flashbacks, which makes the relationship between Harry and the other Beuxbatons students feel unerned. If you would be interested in a re-write, you could expand on Harry's life through the years at Beuxbatons, maybe even before that, when he ran away. How did he get to France? Who helped him? He was, after all, a child ranging from 5 to 10 years old.
The next thing I want to mention is about the characters; they seem very one dimensional, with very simple motivations that don't feel real. One of the best ways to write relatable chatacters is by showing their flaws, because people are naturally flawed and we want to see some of that in the chatacters we read about. Along these lines, every character has a tragic backstory; that's not a bad thing if it adds dimension, but it doesn't equate to character flaw because it isn't part of their inherent personality but something that happened to them.
I think this story has great potential if you ever decide to take it up again. I hope life has been treating you well.
Excuse meh chapter 5 . 7/16/2019
I’m not abandoning it she said, just a few months she said XD alright well an update is well overdue I would say
PotterHeadHere chapter 5 . 7/13/2019
2000 fucking 8? That was a year after I was born, mate.
Do you even remember this story? Are you going to continue it? I’ve been waiting for a continuation of this Fan-Fic since 2015. Sorry for the profanity at the beginning, blind rage.
AbandonedPlay chapter 5 . 5/29/2019
It's been 11 years now can you let someone adopt this story I or continue it your self I would love to read the end of this amazing story please update it soon
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