Hm abrupt ending, no real snarry :P I mean i see the kissing and so and lots of presnarry but the ending is so abrupt with a note of well better never repeat/remember this little interactionor any mentions of it? I feel a tiny bit miserable and very unsatisfied sorry. I wish you had somehow made the ending more worth, more ending anyway. Cliffhangers are good if something follows but this just keeps me hanging. Anyway I loved the presnarry stuff and everything but the ending was worth the read. Thank you for sharing :)

This was so cute!

Nice!

Dude, have you read the 6th book?
This doesn't make any sense if you have!

THIS was really, REALLY GREAT!
I LOVE IT!

Was that it? I don't get it!

nice

OMG! i absolutley loved the begining of this fic. howwever, i think you could've elaborated a bit more on the fight and the spell dumbeldore and snape made. but anyway...great fic!

it looks more like a long detailed summary than a story, but its good.

xx shadow xx

i enjoyed it a lot. well written and believable transformation. the giant squid thing was ver, ver amusing!

~Frankie

Very nice, I really like the development of the story and the open ending. Really well done!

Really love it.

Love it. Your story covers a lot of time without seeming rushed, which is quite remarkable. I also thought the storyline to be really well developed.

I laughed about the lemon trees. Just gotta love lemon trees, not only because of that song. And Ornithologist!Harry... Goodness, no!

Well done!

aw, i really like this, will there be more? or is it a 'leave it to our imagination' type ending?

i love it. Great job. I esp. liked the thing at the top of each section- "The halls were empty – the entire castle was deserted." thats was a cool bit of symmetry. Nice job.