I've never read something like this ether

awwwww wat a cute story I loved it :D

You should write a sequel to this telling about the story of Bee's long and hard healing. Maybe even a few setbacks if you manage to bring Ultra Magnus and the Elite Guard (especially with Sentinel among them). And maybe even some hard-core Decepticons?

poor bumblebee

your a good author but some of it is... disturbing to say the least

I skipped most I'm happy I did poor Juana fan fic Bumblebee :(

i think you should make a second part of this about bumblebee's would be awesome!

I agree with Gage39, a sequel would be amazing! No pressure though, you're choice :)

Overall, I really liked this story though. Very well written - you should be proud!

*adds to favourites*

Very good. I like it. :)

Keep writing!

-Kangarooney-

I really like this story. You should so write a sequel about what happens afterwards like: how long did it take Bee to trust Ratchet again? how did all of them handle knowing that Bee had been abused right under their nosecones and not knowing it?

You should especially put more Prowl and Bee (friends ONLY) in there as well as some more of Bee and everyone.

Good job!

Please continue.

POOR BEE sooooo bad how all that happened...good ending.

I like this story a lot. you are a good writer. I like a lot of your stories _

good work. Poor Bee.

oooh very good, liked this alot. Especialy Prowl. Ratchet was good too even when he was telling everyone off. Primereminds me very much of one of those counsellors that just always wants you to talk as though it can solve all the problems just by doing so lol. I did think however that the ending was a bit short and could have done with a bit more substance but hey! you killed Megs so no complaints really :p

very nice! nuff said!

aw...poor optimus, with him an his negativity (irony- you know optimistic- optimus)but i think ratchet would ever say something that harsh, that's more optimus-y. like when he called bee a screw up in the last ep of season 1