Reviews for The Waiting Period |
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![]() ![]() Please post a sequel I want to see Alice and Jervis together. Maybe she could become his sidekick or something? I this story! |
![]() ![]() Wonder who was robbing the museum piece...probably Catwoman...good story though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOO! I NEED MORE LOVING! I NEED TO SEE MY POOR HATTER HAPPY FOR ONCE! Ironically, you're the worst villain here. Meanie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mwahahahahahaha... I hope they find his body in a ditch... |
![]() ![]() ![]() No. No. NO. NONONONO! F_ *censored while I go kill a few pillows* Okay. Okay. COCKSU-*I'm gonna leave it at that.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must... not... rage... in... comment... section... Great story! Omfg, I wanna go strangle Billy Bob Asshat. (pun not intended). |
![]() ![]() Loved the story. It was awesome |
![]() ![]() Gotta say, Im enjoying the story so far. I hate Billy, he is a dick. I'd like to kick his ass plus he is annoying, i hope that in this story, Jervis and Alice do get together. That would be nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very beautiful story, really well done. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Very lovely finish, I'm very happy Billy stopped pestering Alice, although I do have to admit having Ivy or Harley finish him off was tempting... Still this was very good, and very sweeet. I appreciated the balance of flufffy momments and promoting the actual plotline. I was still a little confused why Billy's cousin was the Weather Man (who by the way is actually a villain, although more of Flash's I believe). I didn't quite see where you were going with that. All in all, thank you for writing such a lovely story, you've had me by the hook these past few days as I ravenously devoured your story. Absolutely delicious! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, I'm really enjoying your story. I usually wait to comment until the most recent chapter to comment on the full story, but I had to voice my love of the fact that you had villains playing monopoly! I was almost falling out of my chair with laughter when Ivy explained to Alice why she was the banker, very enjoyable thank you. I am sure to give you a much better review once I get to the end, but I had to share my amusement and appreciation with you. |
![]() ![]() (: NICE-A! I really enjoyed the story! Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() I love this. Every bit of it. It is just too cute and whimsical not to enjoy! Please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really awesome. Viva La Jervis and Alice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read through the entire story in one fell swoop and I must say that I am floored in the best ways possible. I loved The Mad Hatter in BTAS so seeing an entire story was just beyond awesome. Everything was incredibly tasteful. A few typos here and there but that is no big at all. Happens to everyone. It was just epic all around... Jervis and Alice need more love, and you certainly gave them that, and then some. 3 |