Reviews for Master of Seals |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/13 It’s Sannin not Sennin! Sennin is the ability to use Nature energy, The only person who can technically be the sennin is Jiraiya, Orochimaru and Tsunade can’t use Nature energy, they gained the title “Sannin” because of their achievements in the 2nd Great Shinobi war. Great story! |
person chapter 2 . 5/1/2017 YASSSSSSS AN NEW FUINJUTSU FANFIC THAT DOSEN'T SUCK! IT'S A DREAM COME TRUE! |
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/9/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Syndrias82 chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 n |
mr. cloud chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Vary interesting, hope to see a lot more. |
NightWithMoon chapter 2 . 1/3/2014 the memoir intro is lame, annoying, tedious, and poorly written. just let us read the story. |
Ibskib chapter 2 . 9/10/2013 An interesting story that's unfortunately marred by a distinct lack of polish, in this chapter alone I noticed dozens of errors, most of them sloppy mistakes that should be fixed with some thorough proofreading, not to mention a few author ideosyncracies that would be ameliorated by getting a beta. Another explanation could be that the author isn't a native english speaker or dyslexic, in that case I would strongly recommend getting that beta to help out a bit. A shame really, I like the plot so far and the story has a lot of potential. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2013 when r u going to update this? it's been too long btw it's pretty damn awesome |
DaughterofDante chapter 5 . 1/15/2013 Awesome, love the last line, very good... very very VERY good... okay im done but still good nonetheless |
goku90504 chapter 3 . 12/6/2012 to deliver you're mission assignment, as well as formal apologies for not giving it in person. She as alot of paperwork to fill out your and has allot Dosu managed to confirm it by testing his heart rate without the man, Koiban was his name, from knowing. no from at the end develope is develop unsueing is ensuing |
goku90504 chapter 2 . 12/6/2012 you keep using strait when you should be using straight the former being something along the lines of a man maid river or something while the latter is an unbent or curved direction or line |
goku90504 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012 a few typos but other wise a great chapter |
Ultimate fiction chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 You made naruto above average,kuybi with god like speed and power. That was ok in my book. But you made kabuto more stronger than a god. Sorry it's too big a plot hole for me to ignore and continue reading. All the best with your story. |
empresskitsune chapter 5 . 5/6/2012 Aww, and I really wanted to see the plans come to fruition! Looking forward to it! |