Hi! I'm a new assassin's creed fan and since I played AC II first, I'm seriously charmed by ezio, but thanks to this story, I think I fell a little bit in love with Altair too even though I never played AC I. This is a very beautiful story... I should study math right now, but I. Just. Can't. Stop. Reading. Thanks for making a great story like this and sorry for the utterly late review :)

This story is absolutely amazing and I have always loved it from when I first read it, over three years ago! I always find myself coming back to it and loving it even more each time I read it. It was one of the first pieces of fan fiction that I read and will hold a special place in my heart because of that. Asra is an amazing character and I love how she developed through the writing. Altaïr was always in character and Malik was awesome as well. I will never forget this story, as it has made a huge impact on my life and was one of the main reasons why I really got into fan fiction. Thank you so much for writing this story, I love it to pieces. 3

I noticed you have a typo in you story, what you meant by heart has been misspelled as hear t

You should totally make more amazing stories like this!
I can understand that you like to read more,but this is one of the best stories I've read,and would really like to read more of them.

I find the plot of this fanfic rather captivating, though I couldn't help but notice that you repeat words often and use unnecessary -ly words in dialogue. Should you make Asra a stronger heroine, this may be one of the top fanfictions.
-Katarina

BECOME. AN AUTHOR. I mean, when I write, my friends say I have a gift, but if that's true, you're like a God in the novel world. Seriously though, tell me if you've published anything because I WILL READ IT.

What a great story! Loved your characters. Cheers :)

I have to admit, this is in the top 10 stories that I have read on this site. And I have read over 200 fanfics! Thank you soo much for writing this story!

I loved this!
I thought the original characters were nice additions, they were futting to the world you created. My only critucism is that Altaïr was too out of character. He's really joking and casual and jovial to her, but he wasn't like that in the game at all. I personally saw him as a serious, very grave kind of person. I do give some benefit of the doubt in that this is after Altaïr's big realization after he kills Al Mualim and understands the true meaning of the Creed, but still.
Anyways, I really did enjoy this so thanks for writing it!

Oh my Godly God goodness! I.. I just... Blehhhh...! I can't formulate proper sentences! I read the whole 38 chapters in two days but it feels like a millennia! So much happened and so many thing where said an it was too beautiful for me to even express. Just like : YES! You write exquisitely, every word meaning something and argh! I can't... Just bleh! Ok, *takes a breath* I loved it. The story, how it tied back to the game and with Asra being Malik's cousin and the crusades and all that and ... Just brilliant! I loved the chemistry between Asra and Altair though I would have liked to see more hesitation from Altair at the beginning of the story instead of just that bucket of cold water at the end. I love what you did with his past and with Liv! God, i loved Liv. Actually I hated Liv, I really want to slap the woman, but I love what she brings to the story! And argh! Ok, I'll stop before I become intelligible. Brilliant! Keep writing! You're good at it, so bloody good! Bdjwkbsbffl...

I KNEW it was her! :) I love the suspense and the cliffhangers!

I think that I might know who Liv is, but I'm not going to say for two reasons: 1. Spoiler if I'm right! 2. I would feel very stupid if I'm wrong. :P
I Love the story so far! Its awesome!

Oh my god. Words seriously cannot describe how much I love this story. You had me squealing into the early hours of morning and breaking everything in plain sight.. Everything hit me right in the feels! And when Altaïr left her at Berothai I noticed there was like only 2 chapters left. I was like WHAT ITS ENDING LIKE THAT WHUT. I panicked and read on, reaching the last chapter and she was getting married? WAT. I was dreading the ending and then she jumped on a certain person that also made me fall off my chair... ALTIE ALTIE ALTAÏR. *crying forever*
Thank you for the fabulous ending that made me pause every few minutes to squeak and throw my phone 3

I just to say that I truly enjoyed reading this, it was an amazing story! :)

Holy sh** this is one of the best stories I have ever read.