awe, its like you read my mind! I so wanted this to happen!

CUTE!

So sweet...so illegal...yet a great story :D

9_9

I think I just died.

...and came back to life.

and died again.

and now I'm hanging in limbo.

never have I thought that an imperfect drabble of Petrellicest could be so very very perfect. THIS is what dreams are made of and THIS is how the hug should have gone! Two thumbs up and five stars shooting! :D Best thing in the market, Jules :)

wow cool.

:D Wow. That was incredibly beautiful. This was how the hug should have been! You are my hero, Julies!

this is so intense and amazing for such little words! you are MY hero, Julie, for this brilliant piece of petrellicest!

Okay, wow is all I can say. Petrellicest is the bomb! ;D Loved it.

OMFG PETRELLICEST! IT WAS LIKE A SLICE OF HEAVEN, JULES.

*is stunned and silent*

I. Loved. This. Piece.

It was flawless. It was amazing. It showed Nathan and then again, it showed NATHAN. The power in this 'powerless (no pun intended, and then again, maybe it is...) episode was amazing. I really loved seeing such emotion in a scene like this!

Marvelous.

FTW. THAT IS ALL I CAN REALLY SAY. MY THROAT IS DRY AND MY BRAIN IS WASHED AWAY AND I'M A BIT TURNED ON.

Petrellicest forever! This was JUST SO AWESOME.

Nice story.. I really liked it.

Keep on writing.

Undoubtedly, I would be happier if the spirit of this story was about brothers reuniting (because the spirit and tone are both stellar) rather than lovers rekindling a relationship lost by time, but still...it's not bad.

The body language of the two seems to work (I guess it has to, as the dialogue doesn't carry the story, which is a nice idea that I thoroughly enjoy). I would appreciate more buildup to the physical touching (not timewise, per se, but in introspective narration) just to enhance the scene.

Also, keep in mind that you've got to have dialogue tags whenever somebody speaks. Unless you've established a catechism already with two or three give-or-take lines, you can't leave it out. :)

Good work.

Keep writing!

And then Matt Parkman walks in and spoils the moment!

lol, YAY PETRELLICEST. You must tell me, however did you find the show's original script? _

YAY! Petrellicest is so bomb! that was so awesome... will you be doing more heroes fanfic in the future? (the correct answer is yes) I was reading your profile and your ships for heroes are really cool (sylar/mr muggles made me laugh out loud)... and Hiro is my favorite character too! oh my, You are so awesome.