Reviews for A Game of Chess
MagicalSocks chapter 13 . 5/3/2013
I've reread this story multiple times and I really love it! You have a really interesting and original story line going on. If you ever decided to write another sequel, that would be amazing! I would definitely read it :)
KatrinaJG chapter 13 . 3/26/2010
Wow, really just wow. By far the best Reaper story I've every read. Impressive. I loved it all and was sad when it came to an end. Brilliant, all of it.

Sam is a lot smarter than most people give him credit for, he just so babied. Some just needed to light that fire under his arse, who better than Satan himself?

I must admit I was a bit confused when all the princes were mentioned in chapter 4 but after a little research of my own it started making sense. By the end I had it down though.

Man I really loved this, I just wanted to mention that again. This has got to one of the best stories I read in a long while. Cheers!
jennie chapter 13 . 4/18/2009
i swear if you don't write a sequel to this i will go insane trying to come up with what could happen next. it would be so good to see how everyone reacts when they find out sam was in hell and awesome if sam got to sit at a table with the big guy and represent the devil and really gret if he had to go to hell again for some reason or if some of the demon friends he made came to visit him and they meet sock and ben and andi or even if the whole of the sequel is about sam trying to persuade ted not to fire him for over 2 months off work and somehow managing to pay off the parking fine... Just as long as you actually write a sequel! if you haven't already guessed i'm going crazy thinking about this fic, but i just can't help it! trust me, writing a sequel will get you so many happy fans and would be so worth all the great reviews and stuff you would get. *hint hint* i can understand if you don't really want to have the pressure of producing another great hit on your hands (no over exaggeration or sarcasm intended) but you could at least consider it...please? you will be rewarded for your great generosity and general geniousness! *more hinting and then some*
bubblesy chapter 13 . 4/15/2009
i hate you so much. you are such a great writer. seriously. and you haven't written a sequel! no! you are pure evil! you must write more, or i may not survive. i mean it! i need more! please please please please please write a sequel. i'll love you forever if you do... so please? big hug and a million thanks if you do!
fanfic addict chapter 13 . 4/9/2009
wow. and i mean wow. this is the only stoy i've ever read multiple times, and i have read a LOT of fanfiction - i'm sort of an addict... - so HUGE credit to you. this is probably the best story i'll ever find. i know it's asking a lot as this is already a sequel to another (awesome) story, but a sequel to this wpould be the greatest. thing. EVER.

i really like what you've done with the characters. what is sam? this is so much like the tv series, yet so unique too. i'd love to find out just what sam tells everyone about where he's been, and especially their reactions. great idea with the people who sold their souls being the lowest of the - i've always thought they should be treated worse than regular souls. i mean, anyone who would just throw away their soul for hardly anything deserves something bad to happen- you read my mind! anyho, i also want to say that the idea of the devil wanting to resume his original level of power in heaven yet not want to be in legue with god is pure genious and great twist. i could go on forever about all the different plot lines and characters in this story and how great they are, but i'm getting a little self-conscious about how long this is getting and i'm afraid its length will scare you away, so i'd just like to say that this fanfic is all-round perfect - i honestly couldn't find anythig wrong with it. and believe me, i can be picky. i'm sorry you can't reply because i'm not a member of , and i'm uncomfortable with giving out my email address(es) to just anyone, but i really hope you decide to make a sequel. ok i promise i'm going to stop writing soon, just let me say that i think you have real talent here, snd your total lack of gramatical errors does add a plus... have you ever considered writing full-length novels? i know it's a huge step up from a bit of fun on fanfiction but i would consider it if i were you. you've already got one really obsessed fan! (sorry for that reaally scary image. too many "fangirl" fanfics...) byebye! write more! NOW! please?
Niece of the Prophet Zarquon chapter 13 . 2/9/2009
I really enjoyed this. I'm not so sure about the end (Sam's a kind of non-fallen angel? not sure it fits with the slacker we love) but the plot, the buildup and the dialogue were all first class.

Chapter four had me bouncing up and down in my seat and you wrote lines for the devil so well that I could see his orange tan and glow-in-the-dark teeth.

Some quotes kept popping into my head as I read your storys and when I saw the bible verses in chaper 13 I thought I'd share.

'Everything is for the best in this best of all possible worlds' Voltaire

"Reality should be met head on, with laughter on your lips and some kind of weapon in your hand."

"Your brain is your best weapon, a notebook and pen make a good backup"

"Laughter is the only thing that can beat the devil."

"Smile: because tomorrow could be worse."

"Life is sweet... even when you are dead." Laurel K Hamilton
Darian chapter 13 . 1/15/2009
Please More its awesome story write seq son

please please pretty please with Devil on top 8o)
wss3 chapter 13 . 1/15/2009
i love this story, the best of all reaper fanfics!
froggy chapter 13 . 7/20/2008
Aw! That's so adorable What an amazing story; I'm impressed!
Bloxham chapter 13 . 7/9/2008
this story was amazingly good. i enjoyed reading it so much i read it again. and the time it took you to do it is equaly impressive. nice one XD
kate b chapter 13 . 5/18/2008
wow i keep reading your work over and over and over again. i can't stop my self i just love it so much ypu are such an amazing writer serously i am suprissed anyone this good i am actually reveiwing! yer ok iam the one who wrote you that massive paragraph for a reveiw in a plan in acton about writing a third and it is just because i love your work so much i think it is brillant. when i am 13 ( cos i am still 12, damit , why was i born in june?)i am also going to write a reaper fan fic even though it would have ended, it won't be anywhere as good as yours because mine will aslo be a twlight crossover. Anyway, yer i really think you should write a third because it would be the most amazing trillogy in the history of fan fiction EVER! ah bum i am writing to much again arn't i ! well sorry i keep doing it, consider the thought won't you.

your number 1 fan of both storys and the third if you choose to write one

kate

ps i think you are amazing at like everything!

pps ah bum i have already said that

ps why i am i doing this! ok i am really going now BYE
ELVISina chapter 13 . 5/18/2008
wow i love his story!you are a great writer, really.

i hope there will be a sequel to the story.

kiss from italy!
purble chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
Very, very cool.

I love your explanation over how Sam is special. It fits within canon so well (a different explanation than Sam being the devil's son). The OCs were very interesting and real. Though, for demons, maybe too human?

Will there be more stories in this universe? I really, really hope so.

P.S. I love the small mentions of how the devil takes care of Sam. That he tucked a blanket around baby Sam was just too cute.
Tawnya chapter 13 . 4/18/2008
Chapter 13 was totally awesome. It was close to the idea I have about sam except he's part vampire which hasn't awakened yet.
BellaxAngel chapter 13 . 4/6/2008
I've just read the ending, which I thought was interesting. I really want to know more about the devil's plans involving Sam. Great way to end the story!
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