Reviews for Under The Ringo Tree |
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IndigoDarkChild chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 I like the story. Nice 2 see hinata take action. Lol poor kiba. But I can't see a kibaxhina ... just doesn't look right to me. Nothing like a naruxhina |
IsabellaRosa chapter 1 . 2/4/2008 Ah wow, sorry I suck with reviews. Considering that your male (Yes I read the Bio, go me!) you write females really well :D Good job |
Starfire99 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008 It's a good story. I just wish it was longer. |
False Apology chapter 1 . 1/21/2008 This was SO cute! |
AForgottenFairy chapter 1 . 1/21/2008 aw that's so cute! |
R. Van Halen chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 What can I tell you about your story? Well, actually I love the OCCness of the characters. I love the couple (NaruHina hell yeah!) and the plot of the story, of course. If I can give you a little advice (well...) there's ok with the lines when you switch the POV of the characters. But every writter makes their own way :P. Gotta love the story. Keep writing! |
destiny's sweet melody chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 That was soo cute! I love it! |
Mr. Tsquad 5 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 you really need to add more chapters to this, it is a great story |