| Reviews for BREAK DOWN |
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   SuperSaraMoon chapter 3 . 5/21 I’m reading it again because it’s amazing and I have a problem. Damn, this chapter ends so perfectly. You have a way with words my friend |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 25 . 11/18/2019 This chapter was everything. So well done! |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 17 . 11/18/2019 awwwww Zack attach! |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 15 . 11/17/2019 ddaammnn girl, you went for it in this chapter. and you did it well. A |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 10 . 11/17/2019 Cloud, Cloud Cloud! Bad form! |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 8 . 11/17/2019 ooooo i really liked this one. I feel for Cloud; unique choice of exit. |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 7 . 11/17/2019 Damn Seph so mean! |
| SuperSaraMoon chapter 4 . 11/17/2019 Lol. You laid the guilt on pretty thick in the author notes; well here I am. It is good. I'm excited to read it through. The upcoming remake made me want to dive into the fandom. I've been pretty exclusively a KH fanfic fujoshi up to this point, but I love me some Sephy |
| luvnanda chapter 29 . 9/11/2017 For the first time in his life, the general felt a wetness slip down over one cheek, and he lifted a gloved hand, wiping away the single tear that had fallen. "I will hunt you down boy. And I will find you," he promised out loud, his words being taken by the wind. "And when I do..." He had to stop to compose himself. "And when I do...I'll take you again and again. I'll make you remember how you thrilled to my touch. And then..." His voice dropped to a hushed whisper. "I'm going to kill you." I'm speechless... This is so damn good story... I don't even request a sequel for this... The end is enough... Give to the readers imagination... Yuhuu... |
| Vyrian D chapter 30 . 11/24/2015 Noesssssss! Why? Why?! Why stop there?! Update now! You need to update this NOW or I'll send Seph to spank you! *cough* Anyway...that aside...Found typos and grammatical error, but nothing big. As usual, your storytelling astound me. Good job and good luck. Hope you'll update soon |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/29/2015 This is really good so far, scary but good |
| Jean chapter 30 . 1/31/2015 Non-consensual BDSM, that turns into consensual. Not many authors could pull that off. Kudos! |
| Jean Heisler chapter 19 . 1/30/2015 Ah - the truth comes out! |
| Ayden Sadari chapter 12 . 1/30/2015 Sorry I'm not reviewing each individual chapter. I'm thoroughly enjoying seeing Cloud so... so mastered. |
| gingerbreadmantelpiece chapter 18 . 12/23/2014 When is Cloud going to give Sephiroth and Zack the bloody death they deserve? I don't know how much longer I can stand watching them treat another human like a plaything. |
