I hope you come back to this story it seems that maliekal tharakan never did anything with this story.

I don't get it anymore

awesome

couldn't you have at least done a quick summary or little ending scene (you like you get at the end of some films) as to where you might have ended things, because invariably when a person adopts a fic they restart it with changes and its never the same?

Anyway enough of that. Loved the ease and non-confusion of Naruto and his other persona. The dreams I'm thinking are both memory but also part prophetic. Also enjoyed the Minato / Naruto interaction with Naruto being more than a little pissed off. It was going very well, with Narutos pov increasing with richness and a good side order of everyone else. Shame you've lost the will for it :(

A story that focuses on a more serious, melancholy and realistic Naruto is interesting.

Aww! This was such an aww moment! From sad aww, to sweet aww.. and there's even cute aww! OMG when I imagine Naruto curled up in the blankets, with innocent blue eyes saying.. "No..?" Gah so cute! And his tails were wrapping around him, even cuter!

hope you change your mind someday adoptions always get abandoned

Yours is the second story that has Kakashi & Iruka as a couple why? I think Anko is best for Iruka and maybe Hana for Kakashi? anyway great story so far.

A good story, hopefully the adopted version will continue as good as this one did.

I was silently laughing at some parts of this chapter. I like abit of humor in fics.

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Father son bonding. Even though the son hates the dads guts.

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Total awsomeness.

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Man you are good at writing this fic.

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So awsome that I keep coming back for more.

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Boo yeah. The awsomeness.

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