Love it
Perfect

I love this. Great job at capturing Chris and Jal's characters.

amazing...

Oh my god i seriously loved that! Carry on writing Chris/Jal storys. Lets just make out hes still alive lol x

So. Damn. Good.

Please write more Chris / Jal because there needs to be more fanfic for them and you write so well.

That was so beautifully written.

Wow...I think this is my favourite one out of all three of them. I love that you wrote in Jal's vulnerable side. We never really get to see that side of her. You've also reminded me the reason behind Chris being me second favourite character (after Maxxie). Ahh, it was absolutely beautiful! You are an amazing writer...so please, please write some more Skins fanfics. I'm addicted!

Okay; I've now read all of them so far (of your creation that is) and they're AmaZiNg! Seriously; they're all Lovely!

You should really make like one Big fanfic out of them; i mean they're all in sucsesion and all so why not have chapters or whatever? Anyways; I hope you're planning on writing more! They're all so Good! WO! SKINS FANFICS!

:D

Omg,omg,omg!

Majorly awesome fic.

Another excellent last line :)

Please write more Skins fics.