For a story that was mostly sex, this was really great! Whoops, that sounded like a backhanded compliment...I mean, usually stories that are mostly sex aren't really offering much else. But this captured all of the characters' voices really well. I mean, that's why I'm never going to write for this fandom; I can't bounce around pop culture references like that. This show just seems impossible to write for! Which is why it always impresses me when someone is able to do it. I mean, even their sex seemed really in character. I see that you've written a lot of other stuff for this couple and, if this story is any indication, they seem like they'll be exciting reads! I can't wait to check them out!

that last part was hot! wow! great story. i really enjoyed lukes disconfort

That was a lot of fun! Thanks for writing this.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Wow it's awesomely hilarious yet still so sweet and sexy. I love it!

nice.

the whole you smell like... Had me laughing for a while.

Great stuff. :)

that was sexy and funny all in the same time. loved the reference to the candy button. lol

hee-he!

Loved the sweet touches, Lorelai thoughts, and Rory's dare! Sweet and lighthearted...THANKS!

I really liked that one more soon please.

I have read this story so many times and it keeps getting better. I love this story! It was probably one of the first story's I read on . Absolutely perfect! :)

ha i love that

your story rocks

:D! LOL! nice

Sweet, hilarious, witty

And if I had to pick just one favorite part…

“Were you rolling around in a meadow or something?”

“No.”

“Then why would you smell like flowers?”

Cos it made me laugh the most. And of course just cos it’s so Jess.

Reading this just reminds me at how awesome you are at writing Lorelai and Luke. So amazingly realistic and their banter made me laugh my ass off. :-)

Great story, loved it like always

I loved everything about this story! Excellent!

omg that hilarious and hot at the same time! only you can manage to do that. I loved Jess joking around, making Rory embarrassed. Oh, and how Luke and Lorelai was visiting the married (yay!) couple. This was nice and light as opposed to the last one-shot (which i loved also especially how in the end they try to work it out b/c they love each other) Thank YOU!