this is very interesting

this was an extremely interesting start, really cant wait for an update... speaking of which, almost three months? tell me you havent abandoned it... please? anyways, please update very soon!

Wow! I really like your story. Halibel and Shunsui are my favorite characters! Please make another one!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

This is going to be interesting. A gentleman who is almost always half drunk and a woman who could kill in two seconds, I bet Hailbel would try to kill him first but Shunsui would talk to her like a normal person/arrancar and not some over sexed moron (or at least a kinder one) that would make her think A. Kill him and be stuck with the two huge perverts or B. Let him live and be stuck with one not so huge pervert (excluding the others don't find out).

I like where its going if I may quote the tarzan movie "I feel something happening here"

So far 5/5

Your Halibel is win. Grimmjow and Nnoitra need a good beating once in a while. That's the sole reason she's there in the first place. 8D Good work.

Hahaha this is so great! I got this awesome vision! Shunsui coming to Halibel's "rescue" when Grimmjaw and Nnoitora is bothering her. xD So cute! With him being a "gentleman" and all.

I normally don't read such completely non-canon stories, simply because they're usually written by an obsessed crazy who can't piece words coherently together. But I HAD to read this because I knew that it would be great; it was written by the great Miss Karena Sasuke. And even with my high expectations I was happily surprised. This is definitely a very far-fetched pairing, but from what you've written, it sounds like an amazing romance already! I love how Shunsui and Halibel are on opposite sides of the river, and I'm eagerly anticipating any interaction between them. Update soon!

~ m00kie